| "Whitewashed Anchor" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Paine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My goodness, thank you so much for writing this story. Akito is one of my fave characters because of her depth. You took this and instead of making her the evil bad guy brought out her true feelings and such. I love this story. I wish it would ended out better, but please if at all possible write another Akito story with Yuki. I'm not used to having stories end in a positive light with Yuki. Thank you so much. I love you more than you will ever know. Please write more Fruits Basket fan fiction with Akito. I love this story. I cried at the end and I was kinda glad. I should stop praising you so much.
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Reviewed By: loritakitochan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 10:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was excellent as ever,but so so sad!(cry). poor Akito! you did make a great job,and you can be proud. Akito was cruel, loving, child, crazy, twisted ,pitiable...great! Even I,as Akkigure4ever-girl,was amazed. Well,this was a Yuki-Akito-Shigure fiction.i've hoped for a happy end,but it was really good. I really hope you write more! thank you!
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Reviewed By: loritakitochan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 06:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
First i just love this song!I think this is perfect for Akito.So Yuki found out and paid for this.Truth or dare with Akito,it can be good...
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Reviewed By: loritakitochan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Akito is such a child!I'm a huge Akkigure-fan,so i love when Aki thinks about Shigure.Poor Yuki...
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Reviewed By: loritakitochan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 06:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you write.Your Akito and Shigure are really in character.Interesting are Akito's feelings,you describe this very well.I enyojed this fiction.thank you.
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