| "Sister Of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Reviewed By: DarkAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to keep going with the story
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Reviewed By: DarkAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the beast fanfic I've read so far. You really should keep going and not giving up. Also no matter what your story will come out great. Hopefully you'll update soon ok.
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Title: Fabulous!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A ten, as usual! Great work, Anime lover! Keep it up! :)
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 15:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Well done, as usual, Aminelover! This story just gets better and better! You rock!
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Title: Writer's block sucks!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 13:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi AnimeLover! Your fic is great, as usual. The only thing, unfortunetly, that cures writer's block is time. However, when the block is gone, the great stuff pops right out! Hope you get better soon! Ja Ne!
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Title: Big sis
Reviewed By: destiny dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have come so far. I can't be more proud. Some times I feel like you are really my sister when you talk about writing because you know I want to be a writer one day. I am so glad that you are writing one of your own. I love you, chick! Your my favorite sister and one of my best friends. This story rocks!
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Title: I'm sorry to hear that
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 12:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Your fic is great first of all and don't worry about updating when you're this busy. I understand. Your friends Sarah and Amanda sound pretty selfish to me to pull even half of what they did. Moving stinks! I've had too move around too many time to count but, what can you do? Good luck and better wishes for the future, AnimeLover 975. Ja ne! ;)
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 12:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it! Maya and Envy having a baby and the baby could be someone else's? You are the Queen of Drama! Thanks for your comments on "Lonely".
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 18:05 CDT
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Wow! Maya and Envy having a baby together? How cute is that! I'm sorry to hear you had writer's block for so long. It happens to the best of us. I hope you check out my new FMA fic "Lonely" and please tell me what you think. You and your fic rocks!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Soulless Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good, I love it, I can't believe more people haven't read this yet!
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Title: Wicked!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 12:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Even better that your last fic! I'm not normally into Anyone/Envy pairings but this fic has more twists and turns than a roller coaster! Keep up the great work! Also, how did you get the text to be different colors? I'd like to use that sometime!
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Reviewed By: Mkiko_Yoru (not signed in) On: October 02, 2005 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank god!!!!!!!!!!!!! cause that would be really freaky if maya was doing her half brother.
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Reviewed By: Mkiko_Yoru (not signed in) On: September 29, 2005 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sry for you to find this out now but ed and al are envys half brothers. sssssoooooooooooooooo you could put a twist on this like mayas adopted and she finds her real family and they're actually dead or something like that.
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Reviewed By: Magical_Stan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't capitalize every word, it makes it hard to read. Thin plot.
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Reviewed By: rizanroy4eva On: September 24, 2005 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
could do tons better
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Reviewed By: Punked Angel On: September 22, 2005 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is very good, but the punctuation and grammar could be better. I'm not trying to be mean
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