| "The Irony of It All" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: mishizzletran [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 22:23 CDT
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I LOVED IT! it's so POWERFUL... i guess. i can't find the right words.... you describe everything so well.... kagome's feelings.... good job!
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: mishizzletran [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 13:01 CDT
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dat's sooo cute! ^_^ thanks for the review!
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Title: CONTINUE!!
Reviewed By: angel_of_darkness2015 On: September 26, 2005 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you dare stop now I shall hunt you down and ... *people staring like I'm crazy* I mean um please continue it would really make a cool story not just a one-shot you know what you could do is hook Kouga with Kagome at first to you know piss off Inuyasha and get some nice angst in the mix plus that would leave you with something to work with in the "I want you back" department. You could have them met up at a resturant with Kagome on a date with Kouga and have Inuyasha just kinda try to be reaquinted you know tyhe whole "I was wrong i left you but then they left me and now i want you back" thing so those are just a few pointers ^.^ anyway good luck and hurry up and update!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Eithne13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, and I think a continuation will be great. I would prefer, however, that you did keep in w/o crossover, simply an Inu Yasha fic. Keep up the good Work.
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Reviewed By: Ayame/Paradise On: September 24, 2005 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gomen but i'm back again and i was kinda wondering if u could make this in2 a story cause that would b totally awesome. please!!!!!!! lol. also i know this has nuthing 2 do with the story but do u have any idea where a good cyber site is? Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Ayame/Paradise On: September 24, 2005 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gomen but i'm back again and i was kinda wondering if u could make this in2 a story cause that would b totally awesome. please!!!!!!! lol. also i know this has nuthing 2 do with the story but do u have any idea where a god cyber site is? Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Ayame/Paradise On: September 24, 2005 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1 word...Awesome!
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Title: The Irony of it all
Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update it rocks! Please excuse the unfloweryness review I'm sleepy. -_- But it'a a good story!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update
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Title: ooo
Reviewed By: fragile_heart44 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo, this is fantastic! if you dont mind, do you think you can continue A Child's Fantasy Denied? i am giving up on it and i am moving w/o my computer. and since i go to school with you, you can have my sn and story. sry to all the readers reading this! gomen gomen gomen! "yume-chan" is a wonderful writer, shes just new to this thing. give her a chance! onegai?
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