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Reviewed By: im_alive On: May 17, 2009 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there. I reread the first part so I thought I would reread the second part too. It was so much better this time around. The first time I read it I read it so fast and earger that I didn't get to enjoy it fully. SO I loved it. Out of the 3 this is my favorite part. Now I'm not going to re read the third part at least not any time soon. After re reading this fics I've come to realize I hate the third part. The writing is great and I have to complaint about that. It's just the third doesn't seem to fit with the other two. The first two are action, aome angst, and dealing with the romance of the two. But the the third is dark and angst with very little of the romantic aspect. The third part doesn't fit with the feel of the other two. In fact it's more like your other fics My Happy Ending and Banditos it's just not fitting. That's probably why I don't lke the third part it's just too different to tie in with the other two parts. Besides if I read the third part now it'll keep me up cuz I'll be distrubed and angry by it. Which is a good thing to your writing ability. The best writing is always the writing that can get such a strong reaction ^_^
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Reviewed By: Me On: November 07, 2008 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you wrote hotstreak he was very in character you didn't have him just over all gay or anything you had him be richiesexual. I also like how for making one enemy become a good guy you made another worst so as to take his place I can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
If Hotstreak really wanted to make sure Richie were safe he should have killed Ebon. He had more than a couple of chances. Fire is light and it burns-get rid of the shadow and the man. Getting himself beat/almost killed doesn't guarantee Ebon forgetting about Richie-there is absolutely no logic in that. Since Richie was coming partly clean in the sherrif's office he could have told the police that he got the bruises from his father beating him-at least that may have saved him future battles-but instead, he said nothing and probably got beat enough to miss a week of school or more. You really enjoy writing these stories where people hurt and suffer. They're not just short stories either. You make them long drawn out very painful events-don't quite understand the pleasure in that--but you're the author. I may not like the subject matter very much. I may not like the lack of logic at some points in the story. But it is written well. You do great 'street talk'. You do good humor. You do good emotion. So I'm saying that you are a great story teller_I just don't like some of the darkness; but I was warned beforehand. Props for your talent though
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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: i_alive On: September 28, 2005 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firstly let me tell you you were unjustly kicked off ff.net. I reread all your Static fics and the lemons were a lot more detailed than they were at ff. Secondly let me tell you I love the more detailed lemons, I'm all for the Hotstreak/Richie lovin'. (If posted multiple times so sorry)
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Reviewed By: i_malive On: September 28, 2005 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firstly let me tell you you were unjustly kicked off ff.net. I reread all your Static fics and the lemons were a lot more detailed than they were at ff. Secondly let me tell you I love the more detailed lemons, I'm all for the Hotstreak/Richie lovin'.
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