| "Bunshin Pizza" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: October 08, 2008 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job, this fanfic is really interesting~!! ;D
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: RavenSilverKat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the SasukexNarutoxGaara triangle-thing!!!! I loce the story so far and I can't wait to find out what happens next! ^.~
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Title: yaoi=life. yaoi-giver=I
Reviewed By: randomHime On: March 25, 2006 17:00 CST
Comment/Review:
yay! YAOI!!!! ja ne! thats all i wanted to say!
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Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Let's see well yes this is a very creative idea.. I especially liked the opening... hmm look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: XOMagickMoonOX [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 20:19 CST
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NONONONO!!! You can't stop it THERE!!! Rwar!!! Ohmygod, this chapter was soooo good, just as good as the last three!! Yae for GaaraxNaru-ness!!! Love this story (if I haven't already made that obvious). YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!! Don't leave me in suspense like this!!! And what was up with Naruto over the summer?? Hell, what's up with him *now*?? Who's he gonna wind up with?? I MUST KNOOOWWW!!! Please update. *waits patiently*
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Reviewed By: XOMagickMoonOX [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 19:28 CST
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Another awesome chapter. Awwww! Poor Gaara! *huggles Gaara* But it's okay, ne? See, Naruto says he likes you!! Okay... yeah, and there's Sasuke, too.... I LOVE YOU!! This triangle is just priceless!! Lovelovelovelove.... I can't wait to see what Naruto has to say to Gaara. How's he gonna explain this?? Hmmmm.... we shall see. Oh, and by the way, your writing style still rocks. And since you're such a good writer, it makes the story all the more enjoyable!! I hate it when good plots are ruined by bad writing. And, for your story, I can honestly say that it's amazing in every aspect!!
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Reviewed By: MagickMoon On: February 12, 2006 19:07 CST
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And the yaoi-ness is introduced!!! ^^ Aww I love the little triangle-thingy brewing.... 's gonna be good. And I LOVED the confrontation between Sasuke and Naruto. XDD T'was freakin' hilarious!! Absolutely amazing story!!! *goes to read more*
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Reviewed By: XOMagickMoonOX [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 17:45 CST
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This is great!!! I love your style; you make it all sounds so amazing. I mean, I never imagined three people cooking a pizza and making it into a show; that's interesting. Okay, so it's not really a "show" show... but you know what I mean. They sound so passionate about it!! And I loved the Cheers allusion; it made the descriptiveness all the more awesome. You're amazing, and your story involves three of my favorite characters. And it holds the promise of YAOI!! What's *not* to love about this story?? I gotta read more!!!
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Reviewed By: dbc13 On: February 02, 2006 18:14 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG! this is sooooo good! you must update!
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Reviewed By: Itachi_Uchiha17(2 lazy 2 login) On: January 28, 2006 22:44 CST
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OMG YOU ROCK. Yeah, update, yadda yadda yadda. I love your story but... Gaara's eyes are green. It's okay. I thought they were blue at first, but it turns out that they're green. Like really really light green. Jade green. But anyway. Update soon
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Reviewed By: Panzagurl2000 On: January 28, 2006 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ nice!!!! me likeee update soon onegaiiiii!
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Reviewed By: rose/anime On: September 29, 2005 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story very much. please!!! update it soon!!!!
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Title: ooo Good
Reviewed By: Hidden-In-The-Leaves On: September 23, 2005 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goooooooooooood Update again Soon XD aslong as its within a year, ill keep reading this hahaha Well This Is Over All A A+ =) GOOOOOOOOD GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD goOOOOOOoOoOD! P.s. I Like Pizza... lol
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Title: MMM pizza
Reviewed By: kpkchq [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmm pizza, this is good, mmm pizza, update soon! up date !!
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