| "Trial By Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Very Hot
Reviewed By: jdr1184 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a really great job describing the sex scenes. The characters were occasionally a little too emo for my taste, but overall you had a good grasp of the characters' voices. I hope you continue.
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Title: *totally confused*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: August 23, 2006 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Uh, why the hell aren't there more reviews? This thing is the ROCK-ness, and people must be reading it. So why aren't they reviewing??? >< Anways, thank you for still giving us more, despite the lack of appreciation being given to you.
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Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 23:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Love the interaction in chapter 4. I can see Dee reacting that way, thinking of Arnon. Get stuff!
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Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story all around. Like the way you handle Dee and Ryo. Nice Lemony-goodness to. Can't wait for more!
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Title: whew!
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 03:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, damn, that was hot and yummy and all of those other good adjectives! Keep it coming! *nods wisely* You.. have gift... a gift for writing hot deexryo lemons... and having an actual story.. and THAT is a gift that needs to be shared with the world!! Basically, update please! ^_~
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