Reviewed By: Atory On: October 02, 2005 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very impressed by your writing, especially your detail in fighting sequences, the first slaughter being my favourite. This tale is well superior to its source in my opinion. A couple of grammatical errors but other than that your storyline is great. Keep up the good work. I'd love to hear more of this story if possible. I noticed you just had to put Kakashi in it ^_^
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