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| "Perhaps Revelation Comes with Change" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was an awesome fic, I really liked the 1st person POV, now that I think about it, it really is hard to work with. It's kindda hard to see Zolo {yes I use his american name!} as uke but it works. But liek I said, it was totally awesome
| Reviewed By: DeepBlue1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will say this. Not many people can write in first person like you did. I can write first person, and im really good at that. Thats my rating, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
No reviews? That's not fair. One Piece is an entirely underappriciated fandom. In any case, thanks for the very enjoyable read. :D I never would have thought of Sanji topping before I read this, but it works. First person can be a complete bitch to write effectively, but I think you've handled it really well. If I recall correctly, you didn't actually mention either of thier names in the body of the text, and yet you managed to write this in such as way that I knew exactly who these characters were. My only complaint would be the lack of plot, but who really cares when it's this hot? ;)
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