| "In Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: aquaprincess
Reviewed By: jtdarkness On: April 05, 2006 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was well written and had so much depth to it. It was easy to feel the pain vegeta was feeling. Ilove how you brought the darkness in vegeta's past. I truly hope you do a sequel, because this was well thought out and written story by far.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 23, 2006 19:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Wasn't there more to this story than what's here? I remember reading this the first time and I'm sure there was more to the story.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: September 25, 2005 20:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was so nice, could you do a sequel?!
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Reviewed By: Fiore On: September 23, 2005 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was amazing! The emotion runs so deep and Veg's feelings feel so real to me. your an amazing writer, i love all your writing. i hope theres more of this coming soon!
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