| "One day he'll stay forever..." Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: love it!
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2011 22:50 EST
Comment/Review:
You are a goddess when it comes to writing lemons. Seriously. All hail the queen of sex! Heh;) |
Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 08:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, jsut cant get over vegeta saying the three little words, i just like him mean, but still very well written
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Title: Yaaaahhh
Reviewed By: Nouk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 08:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!!!
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Reviewed By: Legana On: October 16, 2002 12:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh, I got goosebumps all over, good idea with the last part *the few lines from the song from Creed* it really gets to me, the story was great, intense , again.
beautiful, yet so sad at the same time....
nice going girlie. proud of you ^-^ |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 09:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'vw always loved this one. I'm glad to see it again! It's really hot! |
Reviewed By: Princess Kitana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKED IT!! Great job. I like the little poem at the end. |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2002 17:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwww! that is really good, i can't believe i overlooked this, it's really good:) |
Reviewed By: v&b lover On: March 23, 2002 18:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank u for not making me scroll sideways that gets anonning |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 17:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope he does stay forever. I will only know if you write another chapter. I can't believe I overlooked this fanfic. I am so sorry. |
Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2002 11:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww *takes hanky and wipes face* that was soooo sweet :) I wanna join the ODHSF appreciation society!!!!! *bounces up and down in front of Ember* canIcanIcanIcanI? k, I'm done, I'm calm... that was really really great, I hope you do more like this... or perhaps a quick little sequel about the day he decides to stay for good? |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 06:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If this fanfic is overlooked then i will have to start the ODHSF appreciation society!
This was just beautiful Gokusgirl. So well paced, and well written, with such good accompanying citrus!
lol i was supposed to be doing some housework, but this was just sooooooooooooo much better! I'll buy paper plates! |
