| "Growing up" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: I READ IT OVER AND YOU KNOW WHAT I THINK ITS PERFECT!
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 02:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY
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Title: UHMM....................
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 01:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
all the chpaters were good but i don't think chap 3 fits in
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Reviewed By: Arisa Niwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was nice. i'm glad you've decided to start writing again. -lyssie
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Title: xbitternessx
Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The writing is done well, though you do have some spelling and grammar errors, which would be easily fixed in an edit. (I'm a stickler, and I always have at least two in every chapter that I don't see until later.) But if someone asks for a review when they review me, I'm always happy to oblige. Write more!
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Title: Heyaaaaaa
Reviewed By: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 15:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! i updated my fic! please R&R! ^^
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Reviewed By: yay firstttt :] On: October 04, 2005 20:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like this o.O yay im first to review :] .. i feel special ^^v ps. im gonna update my story dont worry ^^
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