| "Light Within Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: AngeloflightPd [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just love this chapter. Its great I was wondering if the figure was talking to yugi or yami. and are u going to let us know why he or she is. I hope you up date real soon.
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Reviewed By: redconvoy1 On: December 28, 2005 09:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I like your story, but you need to look your story over before you post it. Your spelling is bad and you need to look the words up in the Dictionary if you don't know how to spell them. The path of becoming of a good writer is to learn not only how to spell, but how to use proper grammar as well.
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Reviewed By: AngeloflightPd [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it so far really good I hope to see you up date more. I saw some spelling misstake in your story like you put (cot is means a small bed ) I think you want the word caught as you caught someone doing something or caught them ) You had couple more like this but other then this your story is great. please up date soon. I really want to see what happen to Yugi and the rest of them
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 04:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked how it's going so far, if you can, please continue.
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Reviewed By: lady Lucette [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 16:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your story is really really nice, by the way thanks for giving me my first review in my story. Please don't take too long to update. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Triana2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 17:22 CDT
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I think Mediaminer has eaten part of your story. Chapter 2 stops suddenly, halfway through the description of Yami's room. Aside from that, I'm enjoying the story so far. You still have a lot of spelling mistakes though. Do you have a beta reader at all? If not, I would be willing to offer to beta this story for you if you want. Get in touch with me if you're interested.
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