| "Crimson Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 08:26 CDT
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Great chapter. I hope they kill him in the most painful way possible. I have a hard time understanding men who abuse their children like that. I can't believe I've been reading this for over two years. I love the story.
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Reviewed By: Soularia Reed On: June 25, 2006 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated! Though I did see a few errors, I still think that a 10 is alright for spelling and grammar. I'm really at a loss of words right now (darn it...my brain won't function). Anyway...I love all of your stories...and just for tradition...update soon! ~Soularia Reed~
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 04:16 CDT
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I feel bad cause you killed off Mokuba, but other good things happened. I don't think you will let Lucien kill Seto, too so I will not worry about that. I wish Gabe had shot or handcuffed him. Too bad no one else was around to arrest him. Yugi and Kalie are now in protective mode and defense mode. So is Yami, if Lucien threatens them again someone hopefully him will die. Yami will protect them with his life no matter how much he fears Lucien. Good chpater.
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: xXDarkLightXx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so awesome! poor yami... this is getting good! plz update!!! ^___________________^ omg, i cant wait 4 da next chappie! i agree, U DESERVE LIKE, 9999999999 REVEIWS!!! ^_^ *is hyper*
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 04:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where are the cops Taita promised? They sure could use them about now. I hope you don't kill off Mokuba. This is really wonderful.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really great! I really wish Yami could get better but it is hard to get over childhood trauma. Wonderful!! Update soon, please or as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Lytha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I can't believe more people are not reviewing. I really think this fic is amazing. Well, there loss I guess. Yeah, you went on a cruise and I died. No good fics to keep me going and all that. *chuckles* Things have also gotten interesting around my house. Well, I have to say that this was a WONDERFUL B-Day present! How did you know? Just kidding. However, it was nice to party all day with my family and then wind down by reading this. Still slightly buzzed on sugar so if I'm not making sence, that's why. Too much cake, candy canes, and a cupcake. Never again I tell you, never again. Until next year of course. *snickers* I never learn. But honestly, good chapter and I can't wait for more. PLEASE write more soon! I can't LIVE without a good fic to read. Since I can feel my brain turning to mush, I need to go. Good fic, write more. Later.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this one. No violence except Yami's rage. It was very tender and fluffy. I hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good. I like this a lot. I hope your writer's block gets knocked down. dragonlady222
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Lytha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I left to go on a long trip with my grandma and was VERY sick the whole time (and even a while after I got back) and you have NO idea what it meant to me to see a message in my e-mail that said you had updated this. I truely love this story and I don't think I can ever stress enough how good I think it is to you. I was soo happy to just sit in my chair and read this story, it made me feel slightly better to have a wonderful story (or part of one) to distract myself with. Ever felt like that? Well, I must say about the spanish, Keep making your friends translate! *snickers* Honestly though, you can't tell if you HAVE made a mistake and I think it fits well. I LOVED this chapter by the way. I just realized I told you everything else that I liked/loved, but I didn't say how much I really, REALLY LOVED this chapter! I can't WAIT to see what happens next! I love the idea you have here, I love the way you write it and I would honestly tell you to improve something, IF there was something you needed to improve on. So far I can see nothing, so keep up the amazing work! Well, I'm tired now and slightly rambling and will soon stop making sence so I'll leave you until the next chapter! Later.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and if media miner wasn't so screwy I would have reviewed a lot more but it keeps kicking me off when I try to review. It's a great story and I love Yami's character. He's lucky to have such great friends. I hope he and Seto get a better understanding of each other.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Lytha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm back and boy did I enjoy that just as much as before! I have to say that when I saw that you dedicated this chapter to me I did a little dance and determined right there to be here every time and to try reading your other fics too. I'm glad to have made you happy, but you honestly do deserve more reviews because you are just that good. More people need to read this fic and tell you what a wonderful writer you really are! Moving on, I think you really do a good job of showing (for lack of better words) the character's character. If you follow that I commend you. *chuckles* I can't wait for the next chapter, protection detail. That is if you're going to show us what happens there. Also, do you happen to speak spanish yourself? I happen to like the way you use it and translate for us. Unlike some authors, you don't leave us hanging until the very end to find out what they said. Well, keep up the amazing work and I can't wait for more! I'll be here next chapter and possibly in some of the other fics you've written. Later.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never seen a fic like this. I really enjoy reading it. Update soon, please.
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Title: Hathor
Reviewed By: Hathor_goddess On: September 30, 2005 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't believe it! i review only???? you deserve 70 or something for one chapter. update please. Hathor
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Lytha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I have read a many a Yu-gi-oh fanfic, but this is one of the best! All the others are cliche or over done, sometimes even redundent, but no yours! I have to say I'm VERY impressed and I CAN NOT EVEN wait for the next part!! I love that your chapters have been long, and will understand if you have to write them shorter because of real life, but I really hope they can stay near this leangth. The way this is written grabbed my attention and I can promise you that I'll be here when the next chapter comes. I like this story so much in fact, that I will be a faithful reviewer for you so you never need to think that no one likes this story! I hope you write more soon, and I will be here whenever you do. Later.
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