Reviewed By: Lafarruis On: January 22, 2002 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have given you straight tens but I go by the saying that nothings perfect meaning everyone can use some improvement. Your fic is GREAT!!! Oh, will you be a writer someday? I mean you described the way the characters were feeling greatly. Your story is amazing. As for the ratings on spelling and grammer, and style of writing don't pay any attention to them. We all write and many different ways and you'll be suprised how many nationally published authors don't really go by the rules of english grammar. Hope to read more from you. Until then...... Ja!!! |
