| "Hanyou of the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: Samuel Duchesne On: February 07, 2006 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I hope you will update soon! I can't wait for the following! I have so many questions lol, but I doubt you would ever gave me some answers like that! Well, I guess I have to wait...Well, that's about it, I will continue to came look every day! :)
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
he he he Dog on the Catwalk. When you mentioned the nude pic I immediately thought of this: http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/view/31121/ (it isn't too graphic in case you have sensitive eyes) Caitriona
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Reviewed By: update? On: January 31, 2006 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon , okay. bye bye.loving It.!!!!.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 05, 2006 17:55 CST
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Excellent chapter. So far it's going well, lets hope whoever it is doesn't ruin it for them. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza PS. Happy new year!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: arodriguez On: January 05, 2006 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I have read a whole lot on this and other danfic sites, and your fic rivals most... Please write more soon.
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Title: Oooh teh suspense!
Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 23:23 CST
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Aww they are so cute! I wonder who could be producing such strange and familiar youki... in an I-tay-run restaurant no less! XD Great chapter! The suspense is building!! I love this story!
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Title: I'm grayfox01
Reviewed By: me On: January 04, 2006 19:22 CST
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This is a fun read. I'm curious as to whom the demonic presense belongs...
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Title: The best fanfic ever!
Reviewed By: Samuel Duchesne On: January 02, 2006 10:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to say a little thing, I read this Fan Fic in a few hours and IK litterally fall in love with it! it so fabulous! I love the descriptions of the characters, the new look of InuYasha and the new feelings between him and Kagome. I read a lot of Fanfics, both in french and english, but this one is the best! i hope to see the next chapters soon!
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Reviewed By: Ultimategamer982 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 02:03 CST
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its a good story but plz dont turn this riho person into a kikyo stalker type thing when r kagome and inu going to admit they like each other update quickly plz
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Reviewed By: anime_maniac_1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was freakishly weird and now my mind is all jumbly.I'll be waiting for the update.But please don't let Inuyasha do anything bad;I just have a really bad feeling about this.hehe,just me I suppose.tata
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Reviewed By: omg! On: December 31, 2005 14:20 CST
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INuyasha is soooo dead w/kagome when she finds out! she'll probably leave him! poor inu! oh yeah... great story plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 23:15 CST
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I'm digging it. Looking forward to more
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 04:30 CST
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o.o get well soon, hun. I wish I could hand you my muse for like 5 minutes. *snickers* Though he'd probably turn this whole thing NC-17 in about 2 mintues. He likes to do that, lol. Anyway, nice chapter. *drools* May I have that lovely art book? I have like 30 here at home and not one has any hot guys in it... more like grumpy old men. (No, seriously, they're all like over 60.) I know I'm pushing my luck, but any chance you could let me know once you feel better and do update? I'm going to book mark this, but no guarantee I'll find the update within a decent amount of time. I usually only check like once a month, if that, unless I'm told to check. ^_^ Anyway, you know my email address. One error in the chapter, no biggie - We'll publish these pictures tonight" (forgot a period) ~Dark Avenger
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 04:08 CST
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oh my hell, I'm laughing my butt off about this. Poor Inu, but not poor Inu. *giggles like a school girl* Getting suckered into nude photos, ROFL, Kagome's gonna have a heart attack!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 03:46 CST
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Very nice chapter. I enjoyed it. Here's more beta stuff for you - She just hope that Hojo didn't ask her out on a date in addition to her plea for help. She crossed her fingers, and after school was out, she hurried her way to find him before he left. (hope should be hoped) (in the second sentence, it should be "hurried on her" instead of "hurried her") Hhe took them from him anyway, not sure when she'd ever use such things. (should be She not Hhe) She looked at him up and down... (at isn't needed) He had to stifle a content growl at that (contented instead of content) "Okay," s he finally replied, (there's a formatting issue here, has been pressed between the s and the he) ~Dark Avenger
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