| "Hanyou of the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Title: I'm grayfox01
Reviewed By: me On: January 04, 2006 19:22 CST
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This is a fun read. I'm curious as to whom the demonic presense belongs...
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Title: The best fanfic ever!
Reviewed By: Samuel Duchesne On: January 02, 2006 10:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to say a little thing, I read this Fan Fic in a few hours and IK litterally fall in love with it! it so fabulous! I love the descriptions of the characters, the new look of InuYasha and the new feelings between him and Kagome. I read a lot of Fanfics, both in french and english, but this one is the best! i hope to see the next chapters soon!
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Reviewed By: Ultimategamer982 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 02:03 CST
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its a good story but plz dont turn this riho person into a kikyo stalker type thing when r kagome and inu going to admit they like each other update quickly plz
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Reviewed By: anime_maniac_1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was freakishly weird and now my mind is all jumbly.I'll be waiting for the update.But please don't let Inuyasha do anything bad;I just have a really bad feeling about this.hehe,just me I suppose.tata
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Reviewed By: omg! On: December 31, 2005 14:20 CST
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INuyasha is soooo dead w/kagome when she finds out! she'll probably leave him! poor inu! oh yeah... great story plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 23:15 CST
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I'm digging it. Looking forward to more
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 04:30 CST
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o.o get well soon, hun. I wish I could hand you my muse for like 5 minutes. *snickers* Though he'd probably turn this whole thing NC-17 in about 2 mintues. He likes to do that, lol. Anyway, nice chapter. *drools* May I have that lovely art book? I have like 30 here at home and not one has any hot guys in it... more like grumpy old men. (No, seriously, they're all like over 60.) I know I'm pushing my luck, but any chance you could let me know once you feel better and do update? I'm going to book mark this, but no guarantee I'll find the update within a decent amount of time. I usually only check like once a month, if that, unless I'm told to check. ^_^ Anyway, you know my email address. One error in the chapter, no biggie - We'll publish these pictures tonight" (forgot a period) ~Dark Avenger
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 04:08 CST
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oh my hell, I'm laughing my butt off about this. Poor Inu, but not poor Inu. *giggles like a school girl* Getting suckered into nude photos, ROFL, Kagome's gonna have a heart attack!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 03:46 CST
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Very nice chapter. I enjoyed it. Here's more beta stuff for you - She just hope that Hojo didn't ask her out on a date in addition to her plea for help. She crossed her fingers, and after school was out, she hurried her way to find him before he left. (hope should be hoped) (in the second sentence, it should be "hurried on her" instead of "hurried her") Hhe took them from him anyway, not sure when she'd ever use such things. (should be She not Hhe) She looked at him up and down... (at isn't needed) He had to stifle a content growl at that (contented instead of content) "Okay," s he finally replied, (there's a formatting issue here, has been pressed between the s and the he) ~Dark Avenger
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 22:03 CST
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Overall, a very nice feel to the chapter. He's uncomfortable, as he well should be. Kind of feeling alone and confused. I like Kagome's reaction to it all, very compassionate, but perhaps an inkling of the future to come as well. (I'm speculating now... >_
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 20:02 CST
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I liked it so far, catching, makes you want to read more. (Just finished chapter 1, decided on a review per chapter if I can manage it.) Only thing I noticed that was nagging me, was one sentence. This one - Forcing a smile she said, "Okay," she said, and she walked back with him to the shrine. "she said" is in there twice. Just thought I'd let you know. I'm overly anal about things like that myself, so I let others know when I see it and know that they've had someone beta their story. Anyway, off to read the next chapter. ~Dark Avenger
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it from a writer t a writer ur graet up date soon pppppppppppllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssss
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Reviewed By: White Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh...my...god! this fic is soooo good! inu the underwear model? random... and what's up with that woman, she kinda reminds me(i don't know why) of that little woman in the incredibles. Also, the outfits you picked out for inu just had me drooling imagining it, and i completly understand how kags felt. I wish i could see him in those clothes (T_T) Anyways this is a really great fic, update soon!
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Reviewed By: cougiecat1 On: December 12, 2005 23:13 CST
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very good story. Kag and Inu both took being stuck rather well, though I guess dealing with their frustration would have been a full chapter without plot advancement, so it's not really worth it. I'm umm... not really sure what's going on with that modeling company... ummm... humm... Inu the underware model. Something just doesn't sit right with me... though it might just be me picturing that crazy woman coming to Kag's house and beging Inu to take more naked pictures. Can't really picture Kag taking that too well. Looking forward to relationship progression. Hope you fell better soon!
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Reviewed By: bayusandiw On: December 12, 2005 22:26 CST
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Where's the FanArt? ...*_*
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