| "Hanyou of the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 14:18 CST
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So glad this is back! That tricky dog! Should've known he'd show up, sooner or later. Smoking a cigar, no less. Hmmm, have to think about that one a little.... Sneaky Mrs H, along with the devious wolf too. Don'tcha hate being the last one to know? Great chapter, but maybe you had some formatting difficulties? Seems some words were missing, in several places. No matter, still glad to see this goin on.
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Reviewed By: Briana_D [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 04:29 CDT
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oooh! I absolutely love your story and this chapter was sooooo good. Kouga & his Wolves to the resuce...yay!! I really like the way this story is shaping up. Excellent work as always and waitig eagerly for your next chapter!!!~~~Briana
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unexpected was right! First, it's left to Mama to finally break the news to Hojo. He's just so dense (kind of like InuYasha). And it would be just like her to counteract bad news with a good meal. That entire scene was great. And then, InuYasha and Kagome - they got so close… and no, don't interrupt them now! InuYasha should have just grabbed her and run while he could. And now, he's off and Kagome's taken. You would have to have a cliffhanger there! But on to the next chapter… So, those guys were in it together, and the supposed victim is really in charge. Those guys aren't going to know what hit them if they make InuYasha angry enough for his youkai to take over - they really have no idea what he's capable of. And InuYasha is really thinking, not wanting to lose control. And so, we have one boss kidnapping them, and another trying to rescue them - or at least Kagome. I can only guess who the three new guys are. Once again, a chapter packed full of action, and I can't wait for your next update. I just never know what you'll come up with next Excellent work as always!
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Title: Terrific
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 13 was great. But I bet I know who their rescuers are! Kouga! I can't wait for your next chappy! Keep up the wonderful work. and of course... please update soon. :) --- Amy
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 11:33 CDT
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Yay! An update! Thank you! And keep up the good work...poor Kagome and Inuyasha...always interrupted...
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating. I love your story. This chapter was well done. But a cliffy!! ARG! please don't wait too long again for an update. I really would like to know what happens next. You are a terrific writer and your story is wonderful. Keep up the terrific work. And of course.... update soon. :)
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Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 00:19 CDT
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Glad to see that u updated =^0^= Nice job =^-^=
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Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 20:57 CDT
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Good job with the chapter as alwayz lolz ^_____^ I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 21:41 CDT
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Holy crapness! That is really good! OMIGOD obnoxious, clingy, obsessive gay guys (like jakotsu in most AU fics) ROCK MY SOCKS MAN! Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship is blossoming wonderfully as well. IS THE BOSS SESSHOMARU??????? i have 3 reasons why I think this: 1. Light brown almost golden eyes. 2. His smiling is so rare it's scary. 3. He smiled after hearing Inuyasha's description. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ~*Ookami Hime Suriya*~ - and here I thought I wouldn't like this fic...
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 20:18 CDT
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oh my god! what going on! whats going to happen! was the mod guy sessho? hurry kaogme and inuyasha get back to the shrine! oh please udpate soon i cant wait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! This is a very fun story and I am very interested in where it is leading. Sorry, feel like crap so review will be short. Ooooh, wonder if they will run into Sesshoumaru! Love Inuyasha's antics. LOL Particularly the hero display. I can't place those two characters that you have dragging Kags and Inu off, but I'll try to see if they match anyone that I'm familiar with. Of course, it's been awhile since I've looked at any of the older stuff. Well, see you when the next installment arrives! This is a fun fic! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 19:59 CST
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Excellent chapter. Well, at first it seemed that perhaps they might be free of those troubles but those two coming after them like that...something seems suspicious. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 22:17 CST
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Yay!!!!! You updated!!!!!!! I'm sooooo happy^______^!!!!!!!!!! This was a good chapter and I can't wait to read more and find out more about the demons in the modern era and where they are going^_~
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Title: ch10
Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 13:22 CST
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That's exciting! I want to learn more about the modern-day demons too! XD Takeda reminds me eerily of Jakotsu. He and Riho seem like characters out of a comic book for sure. The part with Inuyasha in a mask was soooo super cheesy, but it was exciting to read about him using his Senkon Tetsu attack in Kagome's time. A fun chapter! ^^
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That whole rescue scene had me laughing out loud. And poor Inuyasha - more unwanted attention. I'm so glad you're updating again and look forward to more. Where ARE they going for dinner? And what will they get into next?
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