| "Sumimasen" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Sumimasen
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: AAWW
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 09:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Now i really wish my fiancee was demon , that way me and him could live that long. He acts so much like sess it's scary but damn girl , this storee was great come check out mine. It's called Cuz It is, review please and critic for me too. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very sweet story and a very sweet ending. But, I think you should make separate paragraphs for the characters are saying cause I was confused at who was saying what at times. The ending did made me tear up a bit...
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Reviewed By: Lonely_Night_Stalker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! i love shessy and kag fic and sessho and what was i saying oh great
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Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 17:23 CST
Comment/Review:
*kills Naraku* Fucker! Uggg I hate him so much, but just as much as I hate him I love this story! Please update soon! Love it, Kagome_forever!!!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover007 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. I love it.
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: seeme4real [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love your story very much. Keep on writing. It makes me only want to read more. Thanks again. I await your next update.
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Reviewed By: Demonic_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 22:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's too bad that you need to put this fic on hold. Would you happen to have a mailing list or could I perhaps give you my email address? I would like to know when you begin work on it again.
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Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I hope everything is okay and works out fine so you can come back and update because I love this fic! Love it, Kagome_forever!!
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Title: Sumimasen
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 15:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapter?
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Title: Pretty good. ^_^
Reviewed By: Kimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am *very* puzzled as to why you don't have ANY reviews, when this story is one of the best written fics I've read. I mean on grammar alone, you should have gotten a review. I am really tossed at that... Oo Anyway, nicely-written fic. I see it hasn't been that long since you posted it. One thing I would like to give you advice on, if you mind, is the way you have set up your chapters. It would appear as a one-shot in this fashion, which is what I actually thought it was. Maybe that is what has turned some heads. Or you reposted it..(?) My advice, separate the chapters. Don't skip down and write another chapter right under a previous chapter. Wonderful story. Please do update.. even if for me. ^_~
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