| "Third Time's the Charm" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: shiva14b On: September 30, 2005 13:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never given out perfect 10's before, not even on my absolute favorites that I wait eagerly for. You've done an absolutely amazing job here on all levels. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Geneva150 On: September 29, 2005 20:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
Very erotic. I do hope you finish this fic. It would be nice to see the two men see eye to eye. I like this one a lot!
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Title: Nicely Done
Reviewed By: A Huge Fake Fan On: September 27, 2005 18:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done. You managed to create a really enticing lemon that still had quite an enriching emotional context to fall back upon. No matter what was happening you still had the sense that both Dee and Ryo really love each other; they just need to find a new balance now that the nature of their relationship has shifted. One of my favourites of yours. I look forward to the next chapter, or two.
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Title: much better than porn!!
Reviewed By: A.j a.k.a MangaChild420 On: September 27, 2005 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE THERE HAS GOT TO BE A SECOND CHAPTER!!! YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER. EVERYTHING WAS IN GREAT DETAIL AND I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE!!! THIS IS EXCELLENT!!! I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE. YA FIRST REVIEWER!! ^-^MangaChild420^-^
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