| "Third Time's the Charm" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Himenokori [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2023 18:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story. I truly enjoyed it. That is rare for me.
I started writing fanfiction when I could not find something that I
wanted to read. I would say this reads like a prequel to my own
series, you are a great writer.
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Reviewed By: arcanelight On: August 03, 2006 17:54 PDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you thank you thank you for writing and finishing this wonderful fic. It is one of my all time favorite Fake fanfics (and I'm pretty picky.) Excellent job of keeping them in character, highlighting both of their insecurities about their new relationship and making it HOT. I think your reason for Ryo's reluctance was believable and I like how it was handled. Fantastic, I just can't praise it enough. And did I mention how HOT it was? But not just sex hot, it had "emotional sex hot" which is ten times better. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING THIS!
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Reviewed By: Storybook Love On: July 11, 2006 13:01 PDT
Comment/Review:
*claps hands* Yay! I found another Fake author to read! I loved this story....I think you managed to keep the characters perfectly genuine to the comics. Write more stories! Please please please! *claps hands again*
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Reviewed By: Tsume-chan On: July 08, 2006 19:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story and I hope to read more of it soon.
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Reviewed By: bluesnake40 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 00:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad to read another chapt. All your Fake stories are great and like your Dee/Ryo. You're right up there with my other favourite Fake writers. Can't wait for your next chapt.
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Title: So sad...
Reviewed By: Grumpy Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 11:02 PST
Comment/Review:
What happened? This fic was going so well, so hot and sexy to read. Then everything stopped. Don't leave us hanging, this is cruel.
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Reviewed By: Grumpydemon On: December 28, 2005 20:46 PST
Comment/Review:
Oy, update already. I'm going crazy here!
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Title: So hot it sparks...
Reviewed By: Grumpy Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 12:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot damn, sexiness knows no bounds here! This was fantastic, creative, interesting, and hot. It's great to see sex scenes with sexy FAKE boys that still involve intellect and passion and not just the physical side of things. Please write more, I'm really excited to see how Dee and Ryo come to terms with their, er, problem. And by the way, I would have been totally fine with Ryo going to Dee's ready to climb up his leg.
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Title: whoot!
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 01:25 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so loved it! Because even though it was self-luvin', which isn't as good as them TOGETHER.. we got flashbacks!! *does a little dance* and when you said, and I quote, "But we couldn't have Ryo going over to Dee's ready to jump his bones, now could we?" my only reply is.... yes, *evil grin* oh yes we can!
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Title: I Concur
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 06:54 PST
Comment/Review:
I agree with evilkitten. PLEASE UPDATE. The wait is KILLING me.
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: evilkitten On: November 06, 2005 15:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: evilkitten On: October 29, 2005 18:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update
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Title: Nice Additional
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 18:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done second chapter. Very hot, very steamy, but with nice bits of characterization. It's wonderful to see that you give Ryo a very healthy sexuality. You threw in lots of nice little traits about their characters. Of course Ryo would go and research after his new little discovery. Dee being gentle, even when he was being rough. And Ryo beginning to come into his own sexual power. Really really well done, powerful, sexy scene which manages to keep both Dee and Ryo in character. Of course, with the your next chapter I do hope you let us know that since it's not the sex, what exactly IT is. Again, one of my favourites of yours. I've been a long time reader/lurker. This is the first story of yours I've reviewed and I'm enjoying it immensely. Please update soon. (It was TORTURE waiting for this latest chapter.)
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Reviewed By: one lazy reviewer On: October 03, 2005 10:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoo.... super hot! i can't wait for what happens in the next chapter! let dee get in ryo's pants again!
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Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 13:21 PDT
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WOOT. Lovin' it.
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