| "Third Time's the Charm" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: bluesnake40 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 00:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad to read another chapt. All your Fake stories are great and like your Dee/Ryo. You're right up there with my other favourite Fake writers. Can't wait for your next chapt.
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Title: So sad...
Reviewed By: Grumpy Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 11:02 PST
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What happened? This fic was going so well, so hot and sexy to read. Then everything stopped. Don't leave us hanging, this is cruel.
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Reviewed By: Grumpydemon On: December 28, 2005 20:46 PST
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Oy, update already. I'm going crazy here!
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Title: So hot it sparks...
Reviewed By: Grumpy Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 12:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot damn, sexiness knows no bounds here! This was fantastic, creative, interesting, and hot. It's great to see sex scenes with sexy FAKE boys that still involve intellect and passion and not just the physical side of things. Please write more, I'm really excited to see how Dee and Ryo come to terms with their, er, problem. And by the way, I would have been totally fine with Ryo going to Dee's ready to climb up his leg.
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Title: whoot!
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 01:25 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so loved it! Because even though it was self-luvin', which isn't as good as them TOGETHER.. we got flashbacks!! *does a little dance* and when you said, and I quote, "But we couldn't have Ryo going over to Dee's ready to jump his bones, now could we?" my only reply is.... yes, *evil grin* oh yes we can!
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Title: I Concur
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 06:54 PST
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I agree with evilkitten. PLEASE UPDATE. The wait is KILLING me.
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: evilkitten On: November 06, 2005 15:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: evilkitten On: October 29, 2005 18:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update
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Title: Nice Additional
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 18:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done second chapter. Very hot, very steamy, but with nice bits of characterization. It's wonderful to see that you give Ryo a very healthy sexuality. You threw in lots of nice little traits about their characters. Of course Ryo would go and research after his new little discovery. Dee being gentle, even when he was being rough. And Ryo beginning to come into his own sexual power. Really really well done, powerful, sexy scene which manages to keep both Dee and Ryo in character. Of course, with the your next chapter I do hope you let us know that since it's not the sex, what exactly IT is. Again, one of my favourites of yours. I've been a long time reader/lurker. This is the first story of yours I've reviewed and I'm enjoying it immensely. Please update soon. (It was TORTURE waiting for this latest chapter.)
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Reviewed By: one lazy reviewer On: October 03, 2005 10:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoo.... super hot! i can't wait for what happens in the next chapter! let dee get in ryo's pants again!
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Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 13:21 PDT
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WOOT. Lovin' it.
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Reviewed By: shiva14b On: September 30, 2005 13:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never given out perfect 10's before, not even on my absolute favorites that I wait eagerly for. You've done an absolutely amazing job here on all levels. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Geneva150 On: September 29, 2005 20:23 PDT
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Very erotic. I do hope you finish this fic. It would be nice to see the two men see eye to eye. I like this one a lot!
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Title: Nicely Done
Reviewed By: A Huge Fake Fan On: September 27, 2005 18:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done. You managed to create a really enticing lemon that still had quite an enriching emotional context to fall back upon. No matter what was happening you still had the sense that both Dee and Ryo really love each other; they just need to find a new balance now that the nature of their relationship has shifted. One of my favourites of yours. I look forward to the next chapter, or two.
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Title: much better than porn!!
Reviewed By: A.j a.k.a MangaChild420 On: September 27, 2005 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE THERE HAS GOT TO BE A SECOND CHAPTER!!! YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER. EVERYTHING WAS IN GREAT DETAIL AND I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE!!! THIS IS EXCELLENT!!! I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE. YA FIRST REVIEWER!! ^-^MangaChild420^-^
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