| "Equivalent Trade: When Alchemy Goes Terribly Wrong" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Sweet! ^^
Reviewed By: fullmetalfan On: July 04, 2006 08:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fan-fic. Please keep updating it! Both me and my friend want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: s.h.cho On: June 12, 2006 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't really enjoy the story not because it wasn't good, but because it just isn't what I usually read. Anyways, I thought ot might have been funnier if Ed was turned into a teddy bear!
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Title: neat
Reviewed By: NoZoMi17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 14:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
please please continue the story!!!!!!!!!!.....i have to know what happens
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you protay Mustang as the staillon of a herd that just knows all the mares want to sleep with him. In reality he keeps getting bitten. Its great!! And this is just great, so you better up date before I retrieve my collection of sharp pointy objects.
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Reviewed By: cryo On: December 28, 2005 09:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I must say, the little girl had me leery early on, but ultimately I've been pleased with how very entertaining this is :) Please update soon, I'm very interested in finding out what's become of poor Ed...
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Reviewed By: wil_merk On: December 24, 2005 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep updating this story
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 12:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Poor Ed! I hope that he gets better. And poor Al for haing to deal with a wacked-out sister/brother! HA HA HA! This is awesome!
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Title: Uh oh!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 15:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Al is now clairvoyent when it comes to women's underwear?! Poor Ed!! This was way funny! Keep it up!
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it, so what happens next. Update soon
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Edward's a girl now?! Talk about interesting. Poor Susan, Alphonse is too worried about Ed to notice a girl, beside the fact that he's just getting used to having his body back. Good story so far. Keep up the good work.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: naota On: October 02, 2005 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im eagier to see what happens to eds body, plz continue the good work, and plz dont use to many cliffys, ok? =)
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