| "Big Heart, Drunken Fist" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Rockleerox93 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories! Gaalee is my absolute favorite pairing! Lee has so many unheard of qualities and in this fic you exposed them all. He's magic lol (good for the soul) lol. I loved this XD
|
Reviewed By: yumemi720 On: July 22, 2007 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!! I totally choked on the water i was drinking when i read the part where Lee declared their sexual life....bwhahahaha
|
Reviewed By: protogirl On: November 17, 2006 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey...protogirl here! I seen your story on AFF.net and said I was going to read it...and finally did on another site! ><
ah well this was wonderful! I love how you portrait everyone and Gaara's change was so interesting and well done! ^_^ very nice and funny story
|
Title: the best
Reviewed By: Crazy_Killa On: July 25, 2006 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
roflol i was laughing so hard cuz that fic was so great i love it when ever lee gets drunk he is awsome. if i had it my way he would be drunk almost all the time. any way that was a good one and i think you should do anouther like it where lee is drunk. keep up the great work
|
Reviewed By: Dustbunny3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cute and funny and angsty all at once. I also love the action scenes, and your portrayal of drunk!Lee is perfect. I really enjoyed this and the only negative thing I have to say is that it would help for thoughts to be in italics. Other than that, everything was greta. There isn't nearly enough space for me to cite all my favorite parts, although I must say Naruto's exit from Gaara and Lee's room and the attempts to restrain Lee amused me greatly and the more serious parts were great too. Nice work
|
Reviewed By: Yuikey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!1 that was funny. i really enjoy your Gaara/lee fic , they are the best! ^_^
|
Title: nyeehehehe
Reviewed By: Sasha2999 On: March 21, 2006 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So humourous, and well written! simply awesome! ^^
|
Reviewed By: amiko 16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 10:06 CST
Comment/Review:
WAHAHAHAHA XD Lee is the shit. This is an odd pairing, but you pulled it off nicely. Sap+Maldoror= o_O
|
Reviewed By: DoreeFT [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One note - If Lee were allergic to alcohol, he'd be puffing up bright red and probably would have a load of trouble breathing. In this case, the direction of your fic would probably have to change slighly to Gaara using his sand chakra to transport Lee to the nearest medical centre. ~_*. I think in this case, it's just a matter of Lee being more susceptible to the effects of alcohol than a normal person. @_@. Regardless, one of the more enjoyable fics I've read in a long time.
|
Reviewed By: SharkBoys Lover On: September 30, 2005 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the only good fanfiction of this pairing I've ever read in my life. Your characterizations are perfect. I looked for other fanfictions of the same pairing because after reading yours I liked them so much. I was unfortunately severely traumatized for my efforts. They were so out of character I felt like I wasn't even reading the right pairing. I hope that I'll see more work from you.
|
Reviewed By: 911 call me On: September 29, 2005 18:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good work as usual. All of you're work is good. Will you write more of this pairing? Your a good writer.
|
Reviewed By: Flip Me On: September 29, 2005 01:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
*SQUEAL* this is the best ever fic! I cant believe this apiring works. You rock babe!
|
Reviewed By: ohpudgyone On: September 28, 2005 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. That's all I can say. Gaara Lee forever!
|
Reviewed By: mel^_^ On: September 28, 2005 02:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Incredibly cute and funny! I think you've made Gaara x Lee my favorite Naruto pairing. Thank you for another beautiful Naruto fic!
|
Reviewed By: pixiesmith On: September 27, 2005 20:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
/But the Sand guys decided they couldn't let me punch out the Kazekage's squeeze, so they stopped me./ Wah! That's the best description for a partner I've ever heard!!!! /so Suna could now consider the two men married, get used to it, if you're unhappy feel free to drop by the Kazekage's office after hours to discuss it at length./ Tee, hee, hee. Can't believe someone was stupid enough to try. Tee, hee, hee. I love Gaara and his straight-foward ways. /He was worried./ Sighs. Melts into a pile of pixie goo. Gaara worried. I'm in heaven. And then we get the flashback too! Way to go Mal! /And he didn't feel like presiding over his own trial for public lewdness./ ROTFL. This fic's too funny. Way too funny. What a lovely start to my Wednesday. And a beautiful ending fitting of all of Mal's fics. Thank you so much for this one-shot! The other fic is developing nice and slowly, so it's fantastic to get to read something like this when they're all together. Feel free to write more one-shots to 'make the day' of your happy fans! PS - I like the way the other fic's developing slolwy too. ^_^
|
