| "Talking Through Actions, Actions Through Talking" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: maegerakawaii On: October 07, 2007 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the plot and it is not a hard sory to follow because it is well-written. Spelling and grammar are good, so the story is not confusing when one reads it. I like it a lot and the cliff hanger endingof chapter was evil, yet it was effective in hooking your readers. Keep up the good job and please update soon. You have piqued my curiosity.
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Reviewed By: Review On: December 12, 2006 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic because it's literate and written-well. I think the idea/plot are used well, and i can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
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Reviewed By: Crestcent [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry and write the next chapter, I wanna know what happens next. does the regulars find out the relationship between Ryoma and Tezuka Well Ja ne ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 01:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
great start!! do the others find out about Tezuka and Ryoma quickly? or later on? how far do the two of them go next chapter? update more soon!
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Title: Upadate
Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 10:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm into hentai now so, "YAY! If it isn't finished can you update?"
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Title: Upadate
Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 10:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm into hentai now so, "YAY! If it isn't finished can you update?"
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Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 01:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
*twitch twitch* wow. *twitches some more*
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: October 14, 2005 16:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
hahahhaha bad ryoma!! taking advantage of tezuka while he's sleeping... im sooo jealous!!
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Title: Review from Ren
Reviewed By: Renchio [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There, now you will have at least one review here.... cause this fic so totally deserves it... its so so hot. Tezzie-hot, Ryoma-hot...Ryozuka? SOOOOOOOO hot ^__^ Praise Tezzie, Ryoma, and Fuji! Mada mada dane!
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