"The Murder at Domino City" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: super taco On: July 01, 2006 13:25 CDT Comment/Review: it's asome!i love the mokuba and rebecca thing,cute ^w^
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Reviewed By: LilyIris (NLI) On: September 29, 2005 17:21 CDT Comment/Review: ^^ it's going great so far! it's a wonder yugi and kaiba can still duel while answering questions o_O lol, update!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 06:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is wonderful I hope you get rid of you writers block. I think Pegasus did it. No reason, I just don't like him. Where are Ryou and Bakura?
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 06:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is really good. I can't imagine any of the characters doing this there must be someone else. I like it a lot.
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 18:13 CDT Comment/Review: The fic's great ^.~ and the butler being 'dead as a doornail' lol, I haven't heard that expression in a long time ^^ and another thing...how can sonja and damien be born in the same year but not be twins? cuz it kinda takes 9 months to have a baby....^^; just thought you should know...update!
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