| "Affection?" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: From the author
Reviewed By: Kurayami Ryuu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 07:33 CDT
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Omgawd o_O; Don't give me a 4 for spelling & grammar without saying why, please... And what does it mean when someone gives a 6 for style of writing and a 5 for enjoyment factor, and then just says 'it was a pretty good story'?! *quite perplexed*
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Reviewed By: Amalia a On: July 20, 2007 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was pretty good story, i like how you focus on the 'now'- unlike brooding over the past and flipping from person to person, very simple and very good. also pointed out by another- jounouchi katsuya(jap) wheeler joey(eng).. . .
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Reviewed By: Yunami_Silverblade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 10:19 CDT
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Very cute. I have only one minor complaint: where's the lube? It's mainlyjust a personal pet peeve of mine, but yaoi lemonswithout lube really bother me. It pulls me out of the story when I'm reading and I suddenly think "oh, that's going to hurt!"
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Title: Yet another good story
Reviewed By: Sakura-Laurel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories so freaking much. I swear, it just gets better and better as I read more. This was insanely well-written, and I hope to read even MORE of your stories. Ja till then.
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: KACD2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 21:27 CST
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That was a wonderful story. Very well done.
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Reviewed By: angelchan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading for your story "Beautiful Night" and accidentally happened upon this one. I don't usually really care for Puppyshipping as it's so rarely written in character, but my gods, you've captured. The only complaint I had with it is apparently you got the Japanese and the English version mixed up a little, calling him 'Jonouchi' most of the time, but using 'Wheeler' in one spot. It's 'Jyonouchi Katsuya' in the Japanese (Jonouchi Katsuya if you go off the official subtitled version) and 'Joey Wheeler' for the dub; 'Jonouchi' is actually his last name. Other than that very minor sticking point, WONDERFUL STORY! I'll be sticking around to read your other stories - and will anxiously awaiting more of "Beautiful Night"!
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Title: Affection?
Reviewed By: koalared On: September 29, 2005 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not much into poetry but I really liked your poem. I liked the story too. Of course, love Jou/Seto and liked the slow developement of their relationship. You should continue this, either morechapters or a sequel.
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 18:32 CDT
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Your poem was pretty good! ^^ and 'you're in my spot' lol, you did a great job on this fic! keep up the good work!
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