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Reviewed By: C. T. Rae On: September 29, 2005 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could give it 20's all around i would! I loved this one. My favorite lemon yet, and i have read (and written) quite a few. Absolutely amazing, I just want to read it over and over. Beautifully written, well convayed, i felt like i was Miroku watching from the bushes... lol! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Whatwhatnow On: September 29, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that was your first lemon.. it was so good! lol.. It is seriously among the best I've read.. and I'm quite a lecher myself ^^. Very well written! Be proud of yourself ^^!
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Title: Giving In
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 14:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: me On: September 29, 2005 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O Is this seriously your first lemon?!?!!! That was possibly the best that I have read in a long (VERY long) time!!!!! Two thumbs WAY up!!!!!
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Title: Best lemon ever
Reviewed By: Inuki-chan09 On: September 29, 2005 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have got to hand it to you. This is the BEST lemon I have ever read. You say that this is your first lemon? are you serious? That was an amazing story. Maybe you could look into writing a longer story with several lemons in it!! I just wanted to let you know that your story is amazing and I hope to read more stories of yours in the future.
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Title: TOLD YOU SO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 06:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Michiko!!!!!!!!!! I TOLD YA SO!!! You RAWKED that shit. Fucking FABULOUS Chica! I'm am SO proud of you...what an unbelievably HAWT lemon. Do yo fucking thang!!! WELL DOOOOOOOONE!!!!!! Kiki
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: September 29, 2005 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this was pretty steamy! Not bad for your first lemon! I've never written one, so I have no real right to judge. Not that I'm judging, 'cuz you did a great job on it! But the reason I gave you a 5 on Originality was the whole Kagome is in Heat thing and well that theme is everywhere. But I'm sure you already knew that. But overall I really liked this, good job. Very sweet and fluffy and yet it was steamy and sexy and just really well written. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 00:06 CDT
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That couldn't possibly be your first lemon. That was way too hot to be your first lemon. This has got to be one of the hottest lemons ever and one of the best one-shots ever. Writing -beautful. Characters-hot(InuYasha of course). Overall-da shit ^_^. Anyways, great fic and I wish you luck and prosperity.
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Reviewed By: holycrap On: September 28, 2005 21:53 CDT
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this was totally awesome man. keep writing dude.
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: September 28, 2005 20:53 CDT
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Are you sure that was your first lemon.....damn i've read some rather steamy romance novels that came no way near this good......there are more like this comming right.......... whoooo, i think i need a cold shower now...thanks.
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Reviewed By: silver moon dragon (not signed in) On: September 28, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was pretty damn good for your first lemon lol i absolutely loved your story ^-^ veeeerry hott ;-) lol i hope to see more of your work ;-)
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Title: Giving In
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 15:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Hot damn!
Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: September 28, 2005 15:00 CDT
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*Fanning myself rather rapidly* Damn princess that's one hot story. I'm posting a link to this on my xanga site. Yowzah!
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Reviewed By: amiii On: September 28, 2005 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let's just say that it was very, very good. ther arn't that many good fanfic-henti. Bu this was very good. The "helping" the "torture" and at last the pleasure. Woohoo.
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooh so hot! The wind here picked up and it got intense so I really felt it when they were reaching their climax. Awesome lemon for a first-timer and I hope you will write others!
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