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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(first of all, i'm new here so I'll just give u full ratings. Afterall, u DID do a good job! I think u deserve it!) Well, to be honest, this was so beautiful, I cried (only for a second). U showed how those two were not JUST having (u no wat) but were making L.O.V.E. great job!
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: June 21, 2006 23:46 CDT
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::tears:: wow! i love how inuyasha only wants to please her and expects really nothing in return. ahhh, romance. sooo cute! i think i'll read it again. and you know something's gotta be good if i read it more than once!
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Reviewed By: AmonLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG That WAS Hott I read this Before But I forgot to Comment I guess But WOW I Love this Its Super HOTTT Steamy Hottness Like Seriously WOOOT Thank You Looking forward to your next One
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Reviewed By: i_kill_faeries_cause_im_evil (NSI) On: February 22, 2006 17:55 CST
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that was awesome! and it was yur first lemon? wow, that was sexy, beautiful and in character. sometimes i thnk that demon inuyasha or human inuyasha are the only ones who will have a:the courage to admit his feelings or b:just screw her because his youki knows she's his mate, but this made me start to think that the hanyou could have a first time too!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg girl. that was awesome. i wish i had read this earlier. beautiful work. so sweet, yet sooo sexxy at the same time. my fave is when he is about to 'do it' and he says i.love.you and then hits home. WOW. you need to write more, more, then some more. i think i'm gonna try and read the rest of your fics. i bet they all kick some serious ass. tc
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Title: beautiful
Reviewed By: MC On: January 20, 2006 06:15 CST
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beautiful. absolutely great. i enjoyed that a lot. thanks ^^
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Reviewed By: steelfether11 On: December 12, 2005 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
..wow..no coment
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Title: NO POSSIBLE WAY!!!!!
Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS UR FIRST LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was one of the best ive EVER read!!!!! and thats sayin somethin cuz ive read 100s of lemons. i deffinatly need a cold shower now so i shall have to pospone reading ur other stories till tomorrow. ABSOLUTLY AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!! PLEASE RITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa (not logged in) On: November 19, 2005 22:04 CST
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i love it!!!!!!! omfg i love it so fucking much
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 20:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Ahh, nice. Two cases of spying on each other? Man. I liked it. I liked the writing style a lot. Not many spelling errors. it's really nice to see that. Wow. Off to have a cold shower...
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My dear, I've been overcome with the vapors! That was great. I have to agree with a few others who have already posted that this has to be the best lemon I've read yet. AMAZING! It was so sexy, but alos with all the sweet tenderness. Perfect combination. Well, keep it up dearie, this was fab! *swoons off chair*
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Reviewed By: LaLa13 (nsi) On: October 04, 2005 10:35 CDT
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Oh. My. Kami. (I think... Kami is right, right?) When I read that this was your first lemon ever, I didn't believe it. You are definitely on my top ten list. (Sorry, but I can't put you above InuSaga and fallenangel7583. I've pledged myself to them for eternity. ;-) ) Once I finish writing this review, I'm going to go see if I can find some more of your stories. That was simply amazing! Call me hentai, but I have read a LOT of lemons in my time, and I just got into anime last year! But I think that was one of the best lemons I've read. You should read The Herb. The positions in that story... whew, you don't even wanna know! Anyways, from one hentai girl to the next, I want to congratulate you on writing your own lemon. I haven't gotten around to it yet... Big hentai hugs to a new author added to my fav's list, and I apologize if you're not a girl and I just called you one... heh heh, I tend to mess things up like that. And if you want to e-mail me a lemon or two every now and then (I know, yeah right, but hey a girl can dream, right?) my e-mail is unseen_angel19@yahoo.com. Thanks for a very steamy lemon. Hope to see more of you soon! -LaLa13, the original blonde
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Title: Holy.....
Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 05:02 CDT
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So I'm going to go ahead and join the theme of, Holy shit that was your FIRST lemon?! I think I just got my virginity taken all over again! haha It was amazing! You got the characters down perfectly! And you had the perfect amount of sweet and dirtyness in it. I was archin my eyebrows a few times even and I'm uh..no newcomer to lemon's haha. I loved it! I like you're style haha, you're bold girly. I'd love to see you pour passion like that into a full story. So ya, that was fucking hot, and I'm going to go take a cold shower now. Ja!
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Reviewed By: C. T. Rae On: September 29, 2005 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could give it 20's all around i would! I loved this one. My favorite lemon yet, and i have read (and written) quite a few. Absolutely amazing, I just want to read it over and over. Beautifully written, well convayed, i felt like i was Miroku watching from the bushes... lol! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Whatwhatnow On: September 29, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that was your first lemon.. it was so good! lol.. It is seriously among the best I've read.. and I'm quite a lecher myself ^^. Very well written! Be proud of yourself ^^!
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