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Reviewed By: Inu-geri On: June 20, 2007 15:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! That was a REALLY GREAT chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 20:48 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH LOL 'Excellent Tree?!' It would've been funny if you had named her Chi...sitting there in the middle of an InuFic and all of a sudden...Chi and Hideki? What?! :D ...anyway...I love this story and I hope you don't try to cram it too much into the next 10 chapters...like you said, that's why they made sequels. :D
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Title: Howdy!
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whoa! Rin's quite a mama. Love what you did with her character. Poor thing usually just floats into the background, to ever drown in a sea of mediocrity. I know the OC's are just kinda passing through, so to speak, to impart pearls of wisdom; but I really liked them. I hope they make the occasional guest appearance.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche--NSI On: June 11, 2007 06:43 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grins Good chapter. I can see the set up that you are doing between the children. Actually saw it a couple of chapters back but didn't comment at that time. I suppose the next few chapters will decide whether or not the two will develope a romantic bond or just an extremely tight friendship\brother\sister bond. grins again I imagine that you are going to work on the romantic side though. I look forward to reading it. Later, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 22:25 PDT
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i really like your story... will it be ending soon...
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 21:28 PDT
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Heeheeheehee buwahahahahahahahaaa!!! ::scratches all the words into a pile and hugs them to her chest:: I love them! I luuuuuv theeeem!!! This story.. is GREAT!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 19:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: ranundine On: June 10, 2007 18:53 PDT
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oooo so good. i haven't signed in but anyways, wow love the chapter. very well written and OMG life learning lessons....hmmm that is very good for Miroku and well awwwww to the new aditions to the family that is awesome. and i have one requst for the ending of this whole story(ch. 100) is that the ending be spectacular because i love this story, i don't want to miss it too much!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I'm glad that Miroku is rethinking children!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the amazing work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 16:29 PDT
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HEY!!! thank you SOOOOO much for the translation!!! it really means alot to me. this was a really good chappie... hope Sango will be with child again. Please update, and thanks again for the translations!!!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 15:00 PDT
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that was a nice chapter...i really enjoyed the format and it was nice to have thaat mini side story with etsuko and hideki...thank god miroku is getting his act together...i was just going to yell DO IT ALREADY...but yay for sango...I cant wait for the next chapter so please update soon...thanks
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Reviewed By: LittleSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 14:20 PDT
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aw it was so fast on how it moved on...first its just like yea its only been like 6 years or so and now its 10 years into it! time sure does fly....... i love it and i hope u enjoy updating as much as i enjoy reading...cuz first hand, it does feel really good to get a good review and you so deserve it....
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Title: Gomenasai
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 13:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sooooo sorry the kids are off for the summer. I but I have been reading and wow. I love the Shippos Flame of fear attack it was fantastic. It was like reading the battle of the Tora all over again and you know how much I loved those chapters. You did such a wonderful job I don't have the words to even tell you. I have a reason as to why we can read rin lemon and not shippo. One shippo cuter and two in the anime shippo everywhere and rin is a sometime feature expect when kidnaped. shippo is like everyone son we all adopted him and to see our little boy grow up is sad and proud but most aren't ready for a lemon. plus shippo doesn't have a big expectence role. we know he's playfull and annoying, just like children or younger sibling. ( yes I really thought about this) and to but him with someone else besides rin is wrong. I loved you lemon it was so tastful. I was wimper muddering shippos not a virgin anymore. thank you for writing out of the box with this no one really show shippo with animal intincts so that was a wonderful change. I would like to see shippo handle rin being pupped. But it's understand able you only have 11 chapter left and we still need to get to the future for the reunion.
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 15:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok! I've read everything, and it took several weeks (busy schedule) to do it! But trust me when I say this, it was worth the time to read this wonderful fanfic! You have a great talent here and I can truthfully say I greatly enjoyed the chapter where Rin and Shippo mate. Very nicely done. This is truely a work of genius on your part and I must insist you update as soon as possible so I don't have to wait to long. All tens from me!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 22:00 PDT
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Whew! Finally caught up. Went on vacation, got sidetracked, but now I'm up to speed. Didn't want to bombard you with review alert e-mails. Anyway, I really like how this has evolved and how the characters have matured. Initially, I had a bit of trouble wrapping my noodle around a sexually active Shippo. But hey, you've broadened my horizons. I am immensley fond of the little lessons everyone absorbs from Kagome along the way. They're cute. Good point with the correlation of an adult Rin gettin' busy. Gotta hand it to ya, you do the twisted guilt trip very well! I also appreciated the effort you took to gradually walk us into the intimacy, rather than dump it in our laps. I think that's just what a Shippo/Rin scene needed. You also score some extra points for originality. I don't think I've ever read Shippo sex. Oh, question: did I inadvertently skip a chapter, or did I somehow miss Inuyasha going up against the Flame of fear? Or was it something you haven't revealed yet? Or maybe I'm so stinking tired that I'm missing the obvious? I am curious about something also; it seems the tone of your writing has shifted to reflect the growing-up process of the characters. Was this intentional, or has your style simply evolved? I like it. Good job.
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