| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 14:48 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't wait till Inuyasha gets to meet his niece for the first time!! He was sooo sweet in this chapter when he was thinking up a name for Sango and Miroku's child!! ^_^ Update soon because I can't wait for more.
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Title: Simply beautiful...
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 11:28 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter and all the things that occur within it... It made me smile so mcuh after getting such a angry review on another site! Great job... can't wait to see what's going to happen when these kids start to grow up a bit and how would the parents handle the restless nights... oh and who was born first San/Miro's kid or Sess/Kagu's kid?
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 23:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TBC TBC really...oh please do this is one of the best stories I have read in a long time...I personally am very picky about what type of stories I read especially Inuyasha and you had all the aspects I desired plus more...your writing style was smooth and everything flowed so well and was explained in just enough detail that is was perfect...I think that you could continue...which I know a lot of your fans would prefer or you could leave it but that is up to you...I personally would like to here about Sango and Kagura's ordeal with children as well as Sesshoumaru...hehe...fatherly side...but I hope to read more of this story and if not more work from you...i actually have been reading this story since I woke up this morning and just finished it today...I have been reading constantly ever since because it was that good...please continue our Inuyasha stories whether this one or another...i will be honored and pleased to read them...thank you
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 14:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has the potential to stand up with only a select few of truly PERFECT fics! Absolutely wonderfull story!!! I can't wait to read the rest! (I also have to mention that I caught that brief full metal alchemist quip a ways back, and it made me smile beacause I'm also an avid fma fan!) This is assuredly going into my absolute favorites folder right away!
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Reviewed By: pIpsquEAk On: November 22, 2006 08:42 PST
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This is a great story. Sorry for not having much to say I just don't know what to say beyond that.
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Reviewed By: YinYang236 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 22:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now you have to finish this story!!! This is getting too good to drop at this point of the story. Please update very soon!!!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: November 18, 2006 23:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way the story is turning out ^^ No unecessary plots, just simple family ^^ I'd love to see the story go to when Kazuki is going through puberty XD Gotta see Inuyasha teaching him about girls =p
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Reviewed By: ran_undine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 20:03 PST
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awesome awesome awesome! i applaud (pretty sure i spelled that wrong) very good can't wait to read more! you are an awesome writter!!! i have to say this is one of the best fanfics i have ever read and i love it! i am always super happy when there's a new chapter to read.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 15:32 PST
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Great chapter, it was really touching! It captures the stress a couple goes through while experianing the 'baby blues'. Post-portum is a very important issue, and I'm glad you wrote it into your story in such detail! It also leaves me to wonder if you are speaking form person first hand experince? I have had 6 children and I must have gone though every stage of PPD there is (so has my poor hubby -_-). Thanks for being so accurate in your chapter! I look forward to reading more, til then~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 13:31 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great couple of chapters. I love how you wrote the lemon!! ^_^ Update soon please!! I can't wait for more. Hopefully we will see Sesshomaru, Kaugra, Miroku, and Sango next chapter!!! Keep up the good work!
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Title: Awwww...
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 03:28 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter left me speechless and the thoughts racing through my head is screaming- SOOOO CUUUUTE! Write more soon or whenever you can... you're good with discriptions!
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Title: Poor Kid
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 16:04 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shippo certaintly has grown up and is taking responsibility in this fic- it's so sweet and so cute all at once... Poor baby, to think he has to go through all that every month (sounds like period- *laughs*), well atleast he can communicate a bit... I can't wait to see what his toddler months would be like... Kagome and InuYasha make the cutest couple with a family... but hey what's up with Sango and Miroku's baby and Sesshy and Kagura's kid... will all theses babies be playmates? If so the scene would be the cutest thing ever! Great job with the latest update and I can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 15:32 PST
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So sweet, so cute!~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Alyanna On: November 12, 2006 08:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know that this is without question the best InuYasha fanfic I have ever seen. :) I eagerly await your next chapters, and will mourn the completion of the story, but will forever reread it. I sincerely hope you do others in this setting or sequals or something. Perhaps a Rin/Shippo setup?
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Title: So Happy!
Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 13:31 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter! I love this story! You're such a good writer, I'm getting teary eyed from all the sweetness and the family setting and stuff. Thanks for updating! :D
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