| "The Return of the Ice Queen" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: The Return Of The Ice Queen
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 17:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't wait to find out what happens please update soon
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Reviewed By: SesshomaruBob [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 14:49 CST
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WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?!?!? WRITE SOME MORE CHAPTER PLZ!!!!!
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Title: The Return Of The Ice Queen
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: October 01, 2005 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a very good plot and the story is good. But, you have to work on some of your spelling and grammar. Also, you should make the paragraphs smaller so it'll be easier to read and to leave space between them (the paragraphs). Plus, when you are having the characters speak, they should have their own paragraphs so we know who's talking. I am just helping you out so you can get better at it. I like the story! Can't wait to see the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: September 30, 2005 16:08 CDT
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Every time the speaker changes, should be a new paragraph. It's hard to determine who is speaking in your story. Personally, I think the all caps when a character is shouting is overdoing a tad. Other than that, I do like this story and would read more.
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Title: The Return Of The Ice Queen
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 12:47 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome please?
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Title: Oh Yeah!!
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: September 29, 2005 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heckie yeah, tell ot to him Kagome. Hot damn I love this story. Update, Update SOON PLEASE!! P.S. LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: nosedive On: September 29, 2005 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so great!! I love your story. I have been sick of reading fanfictions where Inuyasha cheats on Kagome, than 5 minutes later he apologizes, and tells her he loves her, and she forgives him!! That is just so wrong. I cannot wait to see what's coming up next. A great way to get revenge is for her to have sex with Seshoumaru, just an idea!
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Title: The Return Of The Ice Queen
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 14:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess, Kagome, and Inuyasha please?
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Title: This is fun...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 05:06 CDT
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I like the story line, but i would suggest that you break the chaps down with paragraphs. It's easier on the eyes & easier to read. And OUCH! Poor Inu...a broken nose? Marring that beauty?! Yipes!
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