Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good, but Duo's really OOC. (Not trying to put you down....just some constructive criticism.)
Please continue soon. (You're not a Duo fan, are you? I am, though. Ya know, I don't think I have ever read a fanfic where Duo was in character.)
anyway......this is good.
Ja~
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