| "Secrets of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Rinji Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so i know this is like, a yr or so late, but i just read the samurai champloo fanfics and loved them! the ooc-ness was to be expected when you take the characters to new places, emotionally, but you manahged to not overdo it. i also really liked the idea of switching POVs throughout the story, it made me really feel more connected to the "narrator." anyhoo, definitely good stuff, and i was thrilled that you actually finished it! so few good writers like yourself finish the stories they start, and that you finished this was pretty awesome :)
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Reviewed By: law916 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I hope you start another soon. Good job.
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Title: Secrets of the Heart
Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent characterization in keeping with the anime yet telling a story that belongs only to the author. She makes this story very believable and entertaining. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: law916 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say "Thanks" for the update. I really do enjoy reading your fic.
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Reviewed By: Gyrfalconne [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 12:03 CST
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MWA! Continue wench!
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Reviewed By: Gyrfalconne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 00:00 CST
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Glad to see you're still at it! Keep up the good work! (and yes, I know how it is writing more than one fic at a time. Its like all these ideas for different stories pop into your head at the same time!) Anyways, just update whenever you get a chance.
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Title: #1 Fan
Reviewed By: law916 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes it me again. Chapter 3 was cute, hot and sweet. You are doing a great job keeping the story interesting. I can't wait for ch. #4. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: law916 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 2 was just too hot. Please write chapter 3 & 4. I can't get enought of this FIC. I check once a week to see if you have updated. Please Update Soon. Great job!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: law916 On: October 04, 2005 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More Please!!! You have a great love stroy going on and I'm hooked. Keep up the good work.
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Title: i do!!
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I DO!! I DO!! I WANT SECOND CHAPTER!!! THIS IS TOO GOOD!!! THIS IS TOO GOOD!! i really like this. It seems like you really thought this out. Conitnue to write and you will hear from me again!! ^-^mangaChild420^-^
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Reviewed By: docious On: October 02, 2005 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this fic. I like the idea of morning after angsting. That two such physically strong and confident men should fear emotional commitment or rejection is just perfect. Please continue with the story, I can't wait to hear Mugen's POV.
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Title: kimper
Reviewed By: kimperr On: September 29, 2005 22:37 CDT
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very nice :) please continue :) Thanks for the great read! Happily awaiting the next chapter!
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