| "Shattered Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: kyuuuu
Reviewed By: 4luvofabrknsl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kyuuu!!! i loved this!!! it was one of the first yaoi-type stories that i have ever read, ans it was awesome!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Read this all in one day. I normally can't stand Cid/Vincent but this was great! I'm heading to the sequel.
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Reviewed By: FMA freak On: January 16, 2006 22:27 CST
Comment/Review:
(oh yeah... this is one of the best fics I've read in a long time. Don't get me wrong- I know I didn't give you straight 10's, but that's just because I'm picky and score really tough on things like grammar when I have to give a NUMERICAL rating. I mean, come on! nobody's perfect! Sorry if I hurt your feelings, or anything. I really do love this story!)
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Reviewed By: FMA freak On: January 16, 2006 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOVEEE it! I'm not even halfway through, but I just had to review. I really like all of the little FMA references you've thrown in- like the flamel, and the Armstrong reference in the chapter, "There's a first time for everything"! I love the VincentxCid pairing! I think Cid really helps Vincent to open up- all he needs is a little love! My parents are probably gonna get mad at me because it's a school night, and I'm probably gonna be up really late reading the rest of this! I just can't stop...
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Reviewed By: Lacerta :) On: December 15, 2005 16:55 CST
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Hiya! People have absolutely no shame... I can't believe such a good story only has been reviewed once! I actually planned on reading all the chapters and then leave my comment, but I'm enjoying this so much that I had to say something. This is very well written and the characters are in character, something not very common on yaoi fanfiction. It was a pleasant surprise when I realised you were going to make Vincent top while in sex, since nearly every Cid/Vincent fic I've read had a way too girly Vincent, who, despite his angsty behaviour and beautiful looks, is actually pretty masculine... And I've always got the impression that even though Cid acts way too 'macho', deep inside he's one big softy, much more sensitive than he lets on... It wouldn't be the first time he renounces to what he wants to make someone he cares for happy… Anyway, I'm loving this. :D You're a great writer.
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Reviewed By: Margyy On: October 29, 2005 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fanfic!! ^-^ I have always loved CidxVinny and this story is really great! I hope you keep writing! *glomp*
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