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| "Many Different Paths" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: yo tadaiima [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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YAY!! I totally agree with being sick of Watching Sakura be the damsel in distress the entire time. I mean, at least in CCS she was fighting back (slightly) but in Tsubasa, she does nothing for the majority of the anime but sit and look pretty. This story has intrigued me the moment I laid eyes on the summary. Please do not abandon it!!! I really want to see how Syaoran interacts with the others. (Yes, I'm a major Syaoran fan) Will he be drowsy all the time? Will he be able to fight? What of his eye and his "Original version" ? Please update soon!!! I will hang on faithfully until you do ^ ^
| Reviewed By: shadow11 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, found it, and you were right from what you said on your fan art. It is a crack-fic. But I like it nonetheless. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Anja [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 13:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Again, very well written chapter. I enjoyed reading it a lot. I love your comment, "Sakura felt cold again; because her price had not been named and because it just seemed that much further away. And Syaoran continued to be a lump in her arms." The lump part made me smile. Anyway, good job, and once again I hope that you continue typing your heart out so that there is more to read. I'll be back as soon as you have more!
| Reviewed By: Anja [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 13:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I actually find the idea of you switching the roles of Sakura and Syaoran very interesting, and...intriguing. I know there are only two chapters up so far, so I'll go and read the next one, and I hope that you start typing again soon. I admit, I had to laugh when you wrote "Somewhere his little sister was in these ruins- somewhere his High Priest was battling and watching his back. Movement flickered out of the corner of his eye, and he saw the unlikely form of the princess limp out, just in time for one of the black clad monsters to swing. Over my fucking corpse!" I know htat was not meant to be funny, and I don't like swearing, but you don't see that phrase used often, and it just struck me as..well, not comical, but it just really brought out the passion in him, and really hit emotion. Well done, looking forward to the next chapter.
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