| "Kanami's problem" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: hmmmm...
Reviewed By: Tury [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I supose there is something to be said about a fic where a minor becomes pregnant. But then again, if you did that then you would have to say something about the person who keeps reading the same fic. So I'll make you a deal. You keep writing, I'll keep reading, and we both won't say a word. Update. Plz
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Besides a few spelling errors not bad. But seriously. Stop with the suspnese and update asap.
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Title: Grrrrrrrrr
Reviewed By: Flame Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 07:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapters. I am checking this out march 2006 and I see a failure to update. I would really love to see this story get finished you have talent at writing this. So enough with the suspense and update.
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Enter the suspence. Please continue with this.
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Reviewed By: SilverKit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think we know that the present will be, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
well I belive we know what the present is.
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