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| "Compensation" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Tenchifew On: June 26, 2011 11:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Extremely entertaining written. Thank you for writing. | Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: denisud On: July 11, 2006 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see you twisted this canon storyline here mnore than in you other stories, Wonder in Megu-chan is preggers too! Yugano'and some others live and the sex scenes were nicely done. An excellent story! Hope to see more Series. I know you aren't familir with Tenchi Muyo, do some research, there are 5 realities, With OAV being the best, hope you consider it after future Eva stories. dennisud
| Title: Impressive
Reviewed By: Red Jehuty On: December 25, 2005 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm actually Jehuty Zero but, my computer is screwing up and it won't let me write reviews if i Log in. Anyway, i haven't read anything this good in a while.
| Title: I second that motion...
Reviewed By: viojase [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 15:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the person ahead of me stated, that was an extrodinairly well-written piece of fiction. I like the way it's following the original story, but with better sex-scenes! I'm reading your Ai Yori Aoshi one, currently and am as impressed. Keep up the good work!
| Title: impressive...
Reviewed By: HisHoliness On: December 10, 2005 15:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You, good sir, have managed to impress me... I don't normally go for hentai works, but my girlfriend(who does), recommended your work to me. I must say that sexier version of RahXephon was not something I expected. I'm glad to see that SOMEONE out there can write a good sexy story without it being stupid, or plotless or pathetic. Damn fine job, mate...
| Title: How long?
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 10:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
...can the poor guy keep it up? Ah, to have beautiful women lining up, willing and able to give you the movie/rock star treatment. All the girls have an attractive character design, but, imo, Kim might have the most beautifully drawn face of a female character I've ever seen in anime. Will it hurt terribly for Megu when it is her turn? When will he and Quon sing their aria duet? Where are the other reviewers for this fic? So many questions... You already know how much I love your Vandread fic; I'll have to check your Ai Yori Aoshi fics next time... Ciao! W.
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