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| "Yugi and the Saber Dolls- Vacation" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: yug--let-the saber-doll-meet mai
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: April 14, 2008 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah i haeted-taht-yug-told -the-doll about yug,s-ferindshp-waith-mai in yu-meest-the-saberdoll-i waes dispoted
| Title: My opinion on this fanfic
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 15:05 CST
Comment/Review:
So, Yugi does take the Saber Dolls to Disneyworld, ne? If I were you, I would've just implied that Yugi and the Dolls went there shortly after the Dartz/Leviathan/whatever incident, but it is your fic. As I've said before, I went to Disneyworld with my grandparents when I was about 8 or 9. Not only was Disneyworld on the itinerary, I also saw Epcot, MGM Studios, and Universal Studios Florida. We didn't stay anywhere fancy, I think we stayed at a Sheraton Inn. Nowadays, even though I cherish the memories of that vacation, I hate Disney. They've become so greedy and soulless, all the magic and wonder is gone. Anyway, back to the fic. The only thing I have a problem with is you driving the "the Saber Dolls have big breasts that attract a lot of undesired attention" routine into the ground. BTW, that shirt that Yugi (and you, apparently) was wearing, you didn't happen to buy that at Suncoast? I saw it being sold there. I hope to read more about Yugi's (and your) vacation, and perhaps later, I'll tell you about my summer trip to Las Vegas...
| Reviewed By: Red Dragon Of Egypt On: October 02, 2005 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one DJ hehe I see you also added Linkin and Alex thats cool hehe and I'm loving this fic so far I can't wait for Yugi to get to see all the sights of Disney World I've only ever gone to Magic Kingdome and Animal Kingdome I haven't seened the others yet and I really want to especially to see all the new upgrades they put to the park huh I just wish they didn't care so much about making it so glamorous and try and out beat Universal thats not what Walt Disney wanted his theme park to be like well DJ keep up the great work and update soon JA NE ^_^
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