| "A Doctor's Touch" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: guess wat'?
Reviewed By: TW haydi On: November 05, 2005 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
3 word's: I just loved it, guess they're 4 but it doesn't mater right? :p
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Title: A Doctor's Touch
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: September 30, 2005 22:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
the end is very... abrupt. after the fuss he made about her being "sick" there should be a great reaction when she actually tells him. right now it's just kinda like "oh... and i'm *insert secret* but that's not a big deal." and then he's like "oh, ok. no big." seems out of character at the end for inuyasha.
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