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| "Comfort among friends" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: Amy the Evitable On: April 13, 2006 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fun. At first, I thought that Ran knew how Yohji felt and was just trying to get Yohji to come clean. But that doesn't seem to be the case. I look forward to seeing what Aya-chan has planned. The late-night talks, though painful for Yohji, sounded so sweet! More, please!
| Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 02:03 CST
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Ah geeze, this made me cry. Glad you have a sequel started. Heh, I've been talking to you through yahoo for ages now, finally got to one of your stories.
| Title: Oh dear...
Reviewed By: ApolloImperium [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm...It started off great...But then it sorta kinda...drooped...I mean, Yeah, Yohji got comforted, but he didn't get Aya...ya know? But that's my own person opinion, so yeah...But it was good.
| Reviewed By: the butler [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 22:45 CST
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yes, aya/ran is out of character, but isn't he just cute like that =) i enjoyed this immensely, a simple story, no complications, the angst wasn't as cumbersome (which i like, because too much angst gets to one's nerves at some point) fluff to a point but heck, i enjoyed it. i actually liked the ending as it is, promising, seemingly incomplete but perfect for the story. this is the second fic i've read since i, erm, came back from whatever student hell dimension i slipped into accidentally, and i'm glad it was a great read. may inspire me to follow up on fics i've left hanging.
| Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 19:23 CDT
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Pyronymphy is right, you really need to wrap this up, you know? One more chapter, love, with some hot action, maybe? Pretty pretty please? (attempt #3)
| Reviewed By: Pyronymphy On: October 12, 2005 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a beautiful story, it made me tear up a little. The ending was a little less than satisfying (unless you intend to continue).
| Reviewed By: nates On: October 02, 2005 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is good. There's this wonderful rhythm to your writing that reads a little as if it were a fable or folk tale of some sort. Anyway, keep up and update soon!
| Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 12:12 CDT
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One of these days I will beat KD in saying how much I loved your story. Love it. Update, or I'll keep you in suspense about Red Shaman. Muhwahahaha!
| Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 11:07 CDT
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I will review better when/if I manage to get more sleep. in the meantime--kuwaii!!! I love it! more, more!
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