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| "The Call of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Caleb On: March 14, 2008 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellant crossover with many original touches, this is an interesting story, keep it up!
| Title: You're a genius!
Reviewed By: Matrix Guyver On: February 12, 2008 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading Chapter 9 of your story. Very nice touch giving a back story to Hordak, I didn't see that one comin. This truly is a perfect example of how a sequel to a crossover story should be carried out. I honestly can't tell what's going to happen next (which is great!) and I am eager to see how the story will play out, particularly the fate of Seih, it's about time she pay for what she did, heh heh. In any case, great job that man! This overall story gets '4 gold stars' in both originality and enjoyment-factor.
| Reviewed By: Metal-Man On: April 15, 2007 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If the majority of the stories on the media miner archive are to be taken as a standart, both of your recent works leave them behind by a thousand miles, your style and originality deserve the highest praise. One thing that seems strange though: except the presence of Goku-Kakkarot and a little episode with the Z-fighters in your previous story, the whole magnum opus has very little to do with the DBZ universe I only hope that the end of chapter 9 is what I think it is ;)
| Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Gilligan On: October 18, 2006 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fic especially the first one in this series. The only minor problem i can see in the grammar section is that you kept using the phrase "could of or should of". That is a common mistake but a very obvious one. Please make it right next time because it makes me cringe eerytime i see it. I'm sorry if I insulted you in that part but I didn't mean to. I adore the plot and the idea of having a powerful, semi-evil goku that has a huge empire. I would like to see some more of him please.
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