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| "The Weight" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Warm, sensual and insightful -- who could ask for more? Well, we could ask for more stories like this, I guess.
| Reviewed By: Budiamond [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was very, very impressed with this story. What I liked the most was the characterization; Toshiki's pretty difficult to get across accurately, what with his lack of airtime in the show (Unless you can read Japanese and have read all the parts he has in the manga). I really felt like I was reading about my three favourite GetBackers characters and not a trio of characters with the same names and appearances. But what REALLY got me was that even during the steamy scenes, you managed to keep them in character. Even the most wonderful lemony/limey writers I know can't force an ounce of personality into the characters during their sex scenes, and if you're in the habit of reading lemons, often you'll feel as if you're just reading the same situation over and over. Anyway, I'm very impressed that you managed this so gracefully (Or would it be appropriate to say elegantly here, considering who the characters are?), and I think that you should be proud of yourself. I thought you fit Toshiki in with them quite well, which is also quite a feat... considering that I'm a die-hard Kazuki x Juubei fan and although I love Toshiki, I refuse to let him get much Kazuki booty. So it's usually hard to please me, unless it's Juubei x Kazuki
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