| "What's a chimera to do?" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Cyra007 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2010 06:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is nice, I liked how you explored Zel's loneliness and the result of that feeling - entering into a relationship with Amelia, someone he likes, but has no romantic feelings for. My favourite part was when Xelloss called him on it in chapter 5 and he was forced to realize that his new realtionship is a lie based on his fear of rejection. Xel's relationship with the Beatmaster is also interesting, it made me wonder how her interference will affect the bond between him and Zelgadis. I hope your Slayers muse cooperates and you'll be able to pick up this story again someday.
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Reviewed By: d_g On: February 20, 2007 07:59 CST
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I really enjoyed reading what you've wrote so far. I hope that you'll return to it and finish it soon. There are not enough Xel/Zel tales out there for the good ones to remain unfinished.
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Reviewed By: Zuzanny On: April 05, 2005 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic. Mainly the tensions between Zel and Xellos. (I'm a real Z/X fan) When Xellos kissed Zel it made me very happy. I like the idea of Zel being seduced by Xellos even though he resists at first, and Amelia getting over herself. I look forward to reading more of this fic hopefully very soon
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Reviewed By: Yume Katsuragi On: July 25, 2003 22:27 CDT
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You have to write more!! I love ZelxXel fics and it's so hard to find good ones and your's is going really well. I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Xel n Zel Forever On: July 04, 2003 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon, sounds interesting. ~_* |
Reviewed By: Ami On: July 25, 2002 05:18 CDT
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Okay, at the end of the first chapter I was screaming "NNNOOOOOOOO!!!" because I thought you were going to pair Ame with Zel, but now I'm not sure at all @-@; I hope not. Nothing against Amelia (she amuses me, in a weird way and acts like a friend of mine on large amounts of sugar), but I'd prefer a different coupling. *cough*XelxZel*cough* I like your writing style for the most part, though at one point you had in the thought brackets Zel using 'me' and then in the next thought brackets you had it back to 'him'. Just thought I'd point that out. So far, the rest of it has been excellent and I hope the next parts will be up to par ^-^ This has caught me interest, whatever way you're having the pairings and fic go, and I eagerly await the next chapter ^-^ |
Reviewed By: holo On: November 10, 2002 11:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read Chapter 1 and 2 and I like it!You should continue writing this story |
