| "Young Love" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-sobs- NEW CHAPTER PLEASE!! I LOVE THIS FRIGGIN STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! -sniffles- Please update soon! (Unless you ca't then its ok but I just really love this story!!!) |
Reviewed By: TearyEyed On: July 16, 2002 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It led me near tears.I really want you to finish this story. |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2002 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't even begin to count all the times I have read this story and I have yet to review! I ish a bad fan!! V.V Shame on me. -lol- I love this story!!! I don't think either are ooc too badly. And even if they are, it gives the story a twist. Unlike some people's stories who are determined to keep them in character throughout the WHOLE thing!! ^_^'' Where's the fun in that?? This is a really good story though and I will definalty be on the look out for the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: alex On: May 11, 2002 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry if I gave you that bad rate in style of writting, it's just that i don't like cussing i'm aginst it, but continue the story please? it's really good but I don't understand what OOC means english and japanese are not my first laguage explanation please! anyways continued writting story is great and i loved it! |
Reviewed By: Kapies On: February 09, 2002 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it, even the fact that Vagita is OOC. People should make him cry more often, that probly makes it sound like I hat Vagita but infact he is one of my favorite caracters, my least fav. being Yamcha. |
Reviewed By: Jess On: February 07, 2002 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiya i luv ur fic!I personally did not think Veggie was out of character,because i myself am in a whole different world.Keep writing i wanna read summore!!!!
thankies! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 06, 2002 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh poor Veggie. I feel so bad for him, specially having to put up with that jerk of a father. Why don't you have Bulma give him a capsule house. This way he can leave Bulma's and have a place of his own. Besides when their love blossoms they are gonna want some privacy (hehe). Peace |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 03, 2002 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you said in the last chapter to give you ideas, so I think you should let Bulma wake up first and umm... Ok I forgot. Damn. Well maybe if I remeber I'll tell you later my E-mail addres is cosmicgoku@hotmail.com thanks and I'll tell you the rest if I remember. Bye and please post more soon |
Reviewed By: SS Vegeta On: January 27, 2002 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is really a good story please continu! |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: January 23, 2002 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey tis is a really great fan fic please post the rest up soon can't wait! |
Reviewed By: kandi On: January 22, 2002 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. i liked it a lot. excellent job with the whole grammar thing. contact me with the rest of the story if there is more at kandikisskiss@prodigy.net |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 22, 2002 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story so far. Keep going. |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 23, 2002 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like where this is going. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 20, 2002 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with the person above me with every thing only I really hate weakling (Yamcha, I just call him that because Vegeta calls him that) and Vegeta is my favorite exept Bulma is the same. (That's why I love them as a couple) |
