| "Iiya Motto Moshiyou (No More Words)" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: FFRG Review Prelude
Reviewed By: MissMusicality [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 01:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Since you didn't specify which chapter you wanted reviewed, I'm starting with the prelude. You may submit your other chapters one at a time to be reviewed. You have a GREAT story going here! I was immediately drawn in by the description, as well as the way this prelude was laid out. I did notice a few grammar mistakes, but nothing major. Something I saw repeated, though: you used "where" instead of "were" on a few occasions. Be sure to go over this again, and make sure you have the correct word in. Spell-check won't catch errors like this, and I saw a few of them in there. But your story has excellent description, great characterization, and I like the plot so far. Truly a great job, with lots of detail. Keep up the great work, and thanks for you submission! It was an enjoyable read!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: November 17, 2005 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just love this story. I will review on both sites because I just love this original and awesome story. Update soon.
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: sesshys_jaded_samuri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I hate to admit this, seeing as I am a hardcore Sess/Kag fan....but you've got me hooked....I hope you update this soon...I gotta know what happens next. I bow in awe at your ability to create the most wonderful stories. luv ya, sesshys_jaded_samuri
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Reviewed By: icygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow continue i can't wait to read what's going on between these two! however have you ever read another great story"eien ni nakunatta shunkan" de wicked-oni! if not i advise you to read it ! also another great story! the curse of the dragon!bye and see you soon!
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Title: I like
Reviewed By: sweet_serena [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I like it the flash back was way long and technically never ended but over all it was good a good basis to start from can't wait for chapter 2 but I know u said u didn't have many reviews just a thought but u may get more if u let unregistered ppl review to u may get better input too.
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: Sci-Jess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story indeed. I hope that will not be the end of it. I hope that you will update often. Update soon.
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Title: No More Words
Reviewed By: Prairie Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An interesting concept story that I hope you will continue !
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