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| "Dispair and Revival" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: very nice!
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 14:48 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this. you are using great description and dialogue, at just the right time, and with the right smount, leveling out somewhere in the middle. I love it. keep going. The thing that I like most about it, is that It's not quite predictable. I could tell that Al was going to die by the second chapter, but that's the only thing that I guessed. It's the only conclusion that I could really draw from the way that you wrote. Update soon, If you are still writing.
| Reviewed By: zerine [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 14:47 CST
Comment/Review:
How is that complete? Update please.
| Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG YOU HAVE GOT TO HURRY AND UPDATE. I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 11:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good so far! Keep it up!
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