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| "Longing for Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Shinsetsu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story. ^^ Sammy's persona was a little iffy, with all the mood changes, but it makes more sense now. X3 And I think you mean deaf, not death when referring to Maggie's Vulpix problem. :3 Good luck and hope you update soon. X3
| Title: Wow,amazing mate!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 08:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, though, I am a bit confused with Sammy and so on, but Kathy is a real meany...kind of....But overall, I think the story was cool. I hope ya continue with it. Good luck and see ya around!!!
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