| "Only Of Each Other" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: puppypal27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2011 03:34 EST
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I absolutely loved the part where Kagome was recounting what she overheard her mother say about giving Inu the sun, Shippo the moon, and Sango and Miroku the stars. I loved the whole story, but that one part has really stuck with me. What an amazing way to show someone how much they mean to you! I look forward to more of your work :) |
Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! you're fic it's great!!! I just thougth at one point that it was going to end when inuyasha began to talk abaout the bad thigs about being his mate to kagome... but the... yes!!!!!!!!! more lemon!!! and a super big amazing lemon!!! really this fic it's kool!!!... well... good luck and happy new year!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: WinterSolstice1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 03:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Bare with me, this is only my second review and im hoping it comes out coherant) _____ This fanfic was amazing. Its descriptiveness was absolutly stunning. It was extremely cute, but at times felt a little corny. But because Kagome was slighty agressive in this fic, it balances out well. The mating mark although common in fics, yours is one of a kind. The lemon was tasetful, so i was pleased about that. Too many times have i read lemons and blushed at the vulgarness. Overall, im very impressed. You obviously show realy talent as a writer. _____ My one complaint is that you didnt put spaces between paragraphs. Its easier on the eyes if you do so. _____ ~Winter~
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 09:28 EDT
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I don't have words for this fic...it was so unbelievable sweet and well..eberything else thats good...you really have a talent and I can't help but me jealous of it...I know you wrote this a long time ago but I hoped that there would have been a sequel...to see Inu's reaction to his pups or a pregnant kagome...but even if there isn't a sequel...you really wrote a wonder and you can be proud of yourself...lovies EV
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Reviewed By: Athoyee On: December 29, 2006 13:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay....Dere's only 1 word 2 describe dis fanfic without any exaggeration and dat word would b immaculate... Seriously! I mean wow!!! Luvd it! :D
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 16:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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::dances around in a fairie costume:: ummm, that means i love this fic. i love it beyond words. i love how you put in the conversation between kagome's mother and grandfather, and that line about the sun and moon and all that! it was so sweet. and how you included traces of the rest of the gang without having then in the actual story. it was really cute. and inuyasha's insecurity nearly made me cry i loved it so much. what else can i say? i love this. it's so fucking well written it kills me. keep up the fucking awesome work.
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Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 08:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was sooo good! you really should make another!
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Title: ~sniff~ AWW ~sniff~
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 02:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really loved this story. i think this derserves to have a sequeal. I would really like to read you views on inuyasha's reaction to his first child -you know the chid he was told he would never have-
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Reviewed By: TLM [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2005 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very good story. I absolutely loved it. Keep up the great work.
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Title: Only Of Each Other
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 17:30 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: (nobody) On: October 03, 2005 22:25 EDT
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this is very nice story. continue writing.
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Reviewed By: Koosei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ very nice, Chibi. turned out very well considering how long it's been since you first started it. :P Maybe I'M the one that's converting you! to the M/F side too! huh? :D
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