| "New Enemies and New Friends, Inuyasha Retold" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: October 22, 2005 22:29 CDT
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nice chap, tho why would Sess be planning the Inu gang when he saved Karma and Sango? anyways update soon.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: October 22, 2005 18:15 CDT
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THAT ARROGENT BASTARD!!! o well, great job. update soon.
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Reviewed By: emmet849 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 13:57 CDT
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Yet another wonderful chapter. I think you did very well with the action and that's not easy to write. I love Karma. She's so fiesty but loyal to a fault. I love your writing style because I can vividly picture everything that happens as if I were watching it on TV. Standing ovation to you, go on, take a bow. Keep up the good work!
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Title: pixieme
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 13:28 CDT
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I love the line in chapter one..."ignore them, their insane"...Good story. Hope to see more soon ^__^
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: October 22, 2005 10:42 CDT
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THAT ARROGENT BASTARD!!! o well, great job. update soon.
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Title: Keep up the Good Work
Reviewed By: emmet849 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 01:38 CDT
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You're latest chapter is wonderful. I loved that I and K got so caught up in their emotions that they didn't notice they were in a very public place. I always thought of them as being very passionate and dare I say a little kinky. Loved the stuff with Karma since I can't cook myself. I hope you can update soon. emmet849 P.S. Thanks for recommending my story! You get a big hug in return!
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Reviewed By: emmet849 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 14:42 CDT
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All I have to say is, Wow! What an amazing story. I love it, please write more when you have a chance. I loved Karma's explanation for why Kagome is not Kikyo's reincarnation. That was amazing, where in the world did you get such a great idea? And the angst between I and K, it's killing me! Such a beautiful story! Thank you so much for writing in and I hope you continue soon!
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Reviewed By: emmet849 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 12:25 CDT
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Hey, great story! I'm not very far along yet, but I'm really enjoying it. I have a question though. I've noticed in you story and in others that Rin refers to herself in the 3rd person. Is this in the Japanese manga or anime? Anyway, keep up the good work. And you should get your own happy dance, although I'm not much of a dancer, so I'll give you a standing ovation instead :)
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: October 17, 2005 15:58 CDT
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of course id review this. i think this is awesome story line that should be continued. tust me i know what its like to have a story in my head that i posted, then deleted because no one liked it. i believe that if you have a story, write it down, because all ideas should be expressed and all stories told.....ok that sounded really sappy. anyways i liked this chapter. please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 10:51 CDT
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nice chap. update soon.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: October 16, 2005 00:17 CDT
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this was a sweet chap. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: October 13, 2005 10:54 CDT
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great chap. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 19:45 CDT
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this chapter was a little confusing. first sess only has one arm so he couldn't have caught both of karma's punches. and second, could you make whos speaking at any one time a little clearer. this was still a very nice chapter, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 22:24 CDT
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this is an interesting start. id like to see where you take this. please update soon.
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Title: New Enemies And New Friends, Inuyasha Retold
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 16:28 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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