| "New Enemies and New Friends, Inuyasha Retold" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: emmet849 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 17:46 CST
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You have really outdone yourself with this chapter. It was so sweet. I have no idea how you thought of the whole ritual but I really want to compliment you for coming up with such an original idea. I have never ready anything close to it. I'm glad Jaken's gone but I wonder if he's harboring any desires for revenge and if it will amount to anything. I hope Inuyasha and Kikyo sort their stuff out. When he told Sess to give the cuffs to Kags after he dies...wow. The simple states was incredibly powerful. I love how you can so subtly invoke emotions from the characters and your readers. Huge standing "o" to you!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: November 09, 2005 17:17 CST
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awesome chap dude. GO JEANS!!!! i was a little confused with the whole ceremony thing...but thats okay, im confused about a lot of things. still it was an awesome chap. update soon.
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Reviewed By: emmet849(nsi) On: November 06, 2005 16:34 CST
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I think you did a good job editing although I must admit that I don't know what you changed. I only know that it flows smoother. So...can we count on an update soon (gives smug grin)? Just kidding, I know you're a busy lady. I'm just a huge fan of your story! Also thanks for telling me about paperdemon.com. It really is a great site
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: November 04, 2005 16:39 CST
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awesome chap. this is by far one of my favs. update soon.
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Reviewed By: emmet849 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 12:01 CST
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Very good chapter. Thank you for updating, I was getting a little antsy. So Naraku now has the jewel shards, huh? It will be interesting to see what happens next. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: October 29, 2005 15:33 CDT
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awesome chap. update soon.
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Reviewed By: emmet849 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 01:59 CDT
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Wonderful as usual. I love the relationship between Karma and Sesshomaru. Its strange how love can change someone. I also like that you used the word "posterior" such a fun word. LOL Can't wait for your next update, but I'm going to sleep now.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: October 26, 2005 21:12 CDT
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awesome chap. you do fight scenes really well. update soon.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(2 lazy 2 login) On: October 24, 2005 17:23 CDT
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nice chap. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: emmet849 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 17:33 CDT
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Phew, that last chapter left me all hot and bothered. I have no idea where you're going with your story, but I am certainly enjoying the journey. Two thumbs up. I wonder what will happen between Sess and Karma. Interesting. I love the name Karma too, it seems so fitting to her character given her mother's past and who Karma is as a person. Update when you can!
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Reviewed By: emmet849 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 15:37 CDT
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So here I am logging on to write a review for your last chapter when much to my delight I find you've written another chapter. Yeah! You deserve something really special for your frequent updates but alas (sigh) I'm poor. My boyfriend, however, did make some very yummy brownies last night while I was at work, so you can have one of them. I think chocolate is the best muse. Great chapter yesterday. Kind of weird that the girls got spanked, but like the expert writer you are, you turned into a very heart felt and touching scene. Good job! Looking forward to your next chapter, I'll review again after I read it. Keep up the good work. Maybe my "subtle" hints along with a few others I'm sure you're getting are paying off. Well hurray for you!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: October 22, 2005 22:29 CDT
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nice chap, tho why would Sess be planning the Inu gang when he saved Karma and Sango? anyways update soon.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: October 22, 2005 18:15 CDT
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THAT ARROGENT BASTARD!!! o well, great job. update soon.
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Reviewed By: emmet849 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 13:57 CDT
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Yet another wonderful chapter. I think you did very well with the action and that's not easy to write. I love Karma. She's so fiesty but loyal to a fault. I love your writing style because I can vividly picture everything that happens as if I were watching it on TV. Standing ovation to you, go on, take a bow. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 13:28 CDT
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I love the line in chapter one..."ignore them, their insane"...Good story. Hope to see more soon ^__^
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